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1/25/2015 c1 Conny14Sam
I've noticed that it must be a challenge to write an M-rated story without it turning out as plain porn. But you achieved the challenge quite masterfully! I could really read a story here, with what felt as real characters in a real situation. Very well done, keep up the good job!
10/15/2014 c1 4Cindy M 19
The end was very funny XD
10/4/2014 c1 Guest
Wow, that was intense. You did an awesome job and have great writing skills.
6/12/2014 c1 Shard Kirigami
Could you make a few stories about the Lego Ninjago series? You know, just like some pieces you would have changed and stuff. If you do not understand this: I am of the Kranish, yes, that is how you say it, religion. Right now, I am bowing in greeting to you of you do not understand.
5/13/2014 c1 Guest
Omg. That was sexy but it was sweet. I love it. :)
4/14/2014 c1 1ObsidianDominionDragon
Wow...hot...very hot. Loved the story. Now I'mma go read the other part of this. Oh and loved how you made Danny all possessive towards the end. I've only read two other stories like that. Very nice. Keep up the awesome work!
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4/13/2014 c1 18Sam Manson Repilica
Perfect i love this very wonderful companion puece
4/13/2014 c1 10Team04Phantom
I was so excited to see a continuation of Wide Awake but you took be by surprise on this, Tori.

First of all, I love this. I feel like this should have tied up the entire story. It was a good way to end it and it had some character growth as well. Don't get me wrong, I liked your Tucker and Valerie wedding ending but it just didn't... deliver... what this did.

That ending, though. WOW. It got hot fast and I did not see it coming. It hit me like a rocket. Lol. I love me some DXS and you sure delivered on that one. That was the most incredible lemon I have ever read. I believe you may be like those of us reading your "Lost" story. We had gone too long without some DxS. You sure as heck put a stop to that :)

Great story. I feel as though I can finally put Wide Awake to bed now. That was a great ending.
4/11/2014 c1 22SamXDanny
DUDE. YOU JUST MADE MY DAY BETTER. SERIOUSLY. I HAD A GREAT DAY AT SCHOOL FOR ONCE, ITS FINALLY SPRING BREAK, MY FAVORITE ACTOR FINALLY GOT A TWITTER, AND YOU MADE AN EXCELLENT FLUFFY ONE-SHOT THAT IS LIKE A SEQUEL TO WIDE AWAKE, MY SECOND FAVORITE STORY BY YOU. (First one is They Had Lights Inside Their Eyes :3)

BRAVO. VERY WELL WRITTEN AND SUPER-DUPER FLUFFY. I LOVED IT. I CAN'T WAIT FOR YOU TO UPDATE YOUR STORIES OR MAKE NEW ONE-SHOTS. WELL, I'M EXCITED FOR BOTH.
4/11/2014 c1 7Funnybombninja
Evil smile.
4/11/2014 c1 15ShadowDragon357
I'm guessing they live with others in that castle...and I'm guessing Sam and Danny's activities woke them up. I don't know how anyone could sleep through that.
4/11/2014 c1 14HappyLeif
BEST SMAD EVER
no but really this is hella fucking adorable and my heart is crying all over again from the initial heartbreak of that fricking story. I REMEMBER WHEN I FIRST FOUND IT OK and it was sooo good and then i saw the update date and i wasnt sure if it was an abandoned story bc i didnt know you yet and THEN IT GOT FINISHED and my heart cried a lot and i was a puddle of dead on the floor and then i regrew from the ashes and now ive deaded all over again
you did this to me. you did this
4/11/2014 c1 8AnneriaWings
this is so terrible wtf are you even doing don't write anymore ever

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