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134The Mocking J
Thanks for taking time out of your DA update schedule to write this at such a great length. Its a perfect Epilogue to The Crowns of Ages.
The Lemmy parts were heart wrenching, but I'm glad Emmy and Layton came to an agreement with her being the maid of honour at his wedding. Her envy of Claire seemed understandable. Then the Clayton moments were wonderfully touching. I teared up when Emmy was remembering Don Paolo (Did I see Dommy hints in there too? ;D) And the scene between Archie, Lisa and Richard made me smile like a fool. (You got Archie and Richards' characters down perfectly!)
I hope this gets more reviews, despite being a story based on a Roleplay. The only thing I would suggest is putting an Azran Legacy Spoiler warning in the description.
134The Mocking JThanks for taking time out of your DA update schedule to write this at such a great length. Its a perfect Epilogue to The Crowns of Ages.
The Lemmy parts were heart wrenching, but I'm glad Emmy and Layton came to an agreement with her being the maid of honour at his wedding. Her envy of Claire seemed understandable. Then the Clayton moments were wonderfully touching. I teared up when Emmy was remembering Don Paolo (Did I see Dommy hints in there too? ;D) And the scene between Archie, Lisa and Richard made me smile like a fool. (You got Archie and Richards' characters down perfectly!)
I hope this gets more reviews, despite being a story based on a Roleplay. The only thing I would suggest is putting an Azran Legacy Spoiler warning in the description.