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7/9/2016 c1 1OBSERVER01
Quite last bit though was amusing
6/13/2016 c1 29IGdude117
Interesting short. Well written- I enjoyed the action scenes, and the line 'Get off my wife, you Space Marine asshole' made me chuckle.

Can't say I approve of an Astartes not cleansing and purging as hard as he possibly can, but I guess that can be forgiven ;)
2/9/2016 c1 15.56X45
Ha Space Marines not getting mad not in the job description. That's clever.
8/2/2014 c1 6BurgerAuFromage
Fuck, I did not see that coming at all, despite the blatant 'Humor' tag added to the description. Nice way to lighten up a slow and grey as hell morning.
4/14/2014 c1 3Chandagnac
Did you re-post this story? I thought I saw it before, lower down the list...

Anyway, I like this story. I like your space marines. They're powerful without being Mary-Sueish – as well as being peerless warriors, they're sensible, cautious and intelligent.

The eldar woman's illusion was clever, definitely something I could see eldar doing. I think something similar happened in one of the early Gaunt's Ghosts books.

I do have one correction to make. [quote]five men against a horde of Dark Eldar, that's the stuff of legend. The Chapter owns you for this. I own you for this.[/quote] – I think you mean "owe" rather than "own".
4/13/2014 c1 65Kondoru
And thusly, we see what utter scoundrels Eldar are.

(A Married SM, seriously? I thought they were all conscripted as pre pubescents...)
4/11/2014 c1 lazylegionspark
Everything ended well?
Is this seriously Warhammer40k?
I did not believe that there were happy endings(Not for the Dark Eldar obviously).

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