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4/30/2015 c5 1fairychime-diamond47
this is pretty good... how come he has a bad feeling? Lucy's pretty nice but maybe it has to do with her sister? ;) was that just foretelling? Carla was suspicious too. XD
3/9/2015 c5 Xrayxanne
Hurry up and update I want to see Lucy twins and fairytail reaction
11/2/2014 c5 7BlueSkies GreyEyes
i like it!
i like natsu's older twinbro! he cool! and i cant wait to meet lucy's i wanna know what she would be likwe! !
7/8/2014 c5 my awesomness
UPDATE
5/2/2014 c4 6Luna Melody Moonstone
I love this story (What dose Natsu Twin looks like)
5/1/2014 c4 8cherrila
OMG! THIS IS SUCH AN AWESOME PLOT IDEA AND STORY SO FAR! 0W0 You mam' or sir get a HUMONGOUS CHOCOLATE-CHIP COOKIE and POCKY-STICK! Keep writing up EPIC chapters! Me REALLY WUBS it! :3
4/14/2014 c3 21Owls The Sailor
I liked it. You did a very good job this chapter. Just be careful of where you put your commas and quotations; those help tot communicate an author's meaning. If they're in the wrong place, it gets hard to understand.
4/12/2014 c2 Owls The Sailor
You kept your style, which impresses me, throughout the chapter, but the tone was different as the POV's changed so this was done well.
4/11/2014 c1 Owls The Sailor
Wow! This is a very good first chapter. A good start to your exposition and into the conflict.
4/11/2014 c1 1Wilhelm Wigworthy
Interesting. Please keep writing! I really like this! :)

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