Just In
Community
Forum
V
More
for Little Progeny

11/6/2020 c2 cardmaster11
This is awesome please continue!
9/22/2020 c2 7 of 13
I don't usually follow a story less than 40,00 words, but I'm instantly interested in this one.
4/27/2020 c2 11Dark-Prince-of-Clowns
I hope you keep writing. _

That said, I suggest you tone down on the burping.
Yes, he does it, but not every second sentence. Even the show toned it down after the first episode.
While it adds character, it DO get annoying when it's overdone.

It's like writing a character with an accent; The common rules is to add just enough to give the readers the basic idea, but avoid overdoing it. Doing it less in writing than it would be in real life was actually suggested by my writing course.

Still... I would LOVE to see what kind of sociopath Harry grows up to be. Especially if he stuffs him in the same 'babysitter-world' as he did Beth. xD
1/6/2020 c2 fay
love this story, sorry I forgot my login.
1/3/2020 c2 4597boss
more
10/5/2019 c2 Lady Kaiki
Awesome ! Plz, update soon !
2/22/2019 c2 7ProngsPotter22
Please, please continue! I can't wait to see what a Harry raised by Rick will be like! :)
3/18/2018 c2 17Loveless Demon
*Claps slowly,tears in my eyes* amazing.
3/4/2018 c2 12Bomberguy789
Eh, it's probably safe to say that you aren't going to be updating this, but it was cool to read the two chapters you did make. Oh well.
2/1/2018 c2 Skull Flame
Man, I wonder what opinion Rick has of Hogwart's staff, and what Hogwart's staff think of him...
12/30/2017 c2 00esoteric00
Please, please, please, please write note if this!
12/26/2017 c2 Satnapillowpants
Can’t wait for more!
9/19/2017 c2 58randomplotbunny
This was just perfect! :-D
9/11/2017 c2 narutoDkurosaki
more
9/11/2017 c2 258ofhearts
I wish you'd continue this! It's a cool idea and I'd like to see how Harry turns out.
64 Page 1 2 3 4 .. Last Next »

Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service