for Gohan and Lime together forever3/5/2019 c1 
19ReaperOfBalance
I’d recommend redoing this by just spacing the paragraphs and everything
19ReaperOfBalanceI’d recommend redoing this by just spacing the paragraphs and everything
8/27/2017 c1 Guest
Can you make the next chapter
Can you make the next chapter
6/17/2016 c1 Lime And Gohan
space space You words Out Okay Other Then That I Thought It Was Funny And Cute keep Going With One Shots Tell You Get it Down
Good Job With You Story I Totally Agree With You About Gohan And Videl Or GV Or Godel What Ever You Want To Call Them I agree With You There So many Come The Hell on
space space You words Out Okay Other Then That I Thought It Was Funny And Cute keep Going With One Shots Tell You Get it Down
Good Job With You Story I Totally Agree With You About Gohan And Videl Or GV Or Godel What Ever You Want To Call Them I agree With You There So many Come The Hell on
12/30/2015 c1 Dratias
One word. Spaces.
I would HIGHLY recommend using the Enter and Shift key and do a bit of editing to this story. It looked like it was very nice, but my eyes literally cannot read huge blocks of words anymore. It all blurs together. I really hope you might add the spaces some day, I really wanted to read this...
One word. Spaces.
I would HIGHLY recommend using the Enter and Shift key and do a bit of editing to this story. It looked like it was very nice, but my eyes literally cannot read huge blocks of words anymore. It all blurs together. I really hope you might add the spaces some day, I really wanted to read this...
8/3/2015 c1 kamrenssj3
awesomethat there should be more people out there that have your Christmas gift and make these storistories
awesomethat there should be more people out there that have your Christmas gift and make these storistories
11/30/2014 c1 Guest
awesome oneshot
awesome oneshot
10/19/2014 c1 20SaiyatonianSage
I like this story although the only criticism I have is: try to break up the passage a bit, like in paragraphs. It's kind of hard to read this in one swoop.
20SaiyatonianSageI like this story although the only criticism I have is: try to break up the passage a bit, like in paragraphs. It's kind of hard to read this in one swoop.