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8/12/2020 c1 1gabelou1991
Pas mal sauf que l'écriture d'un bloc est horrible à lire.
3/5/2019 c1 19ReaperOfBalance
I’d recommend redoing this by just spacing the paragraphs and everything
8/27/2017 c1 Guest
Can you make the next chapter
6/17/2016 c1 Lime And Gohan
space space You words Out Okay Other Then That I Thought It Was Funny And Cute keep Going With One Shots Tell You Get it Down
Good Job With You Story I Totally Agree With You About Gohan And Videl Or GV Or Godel What Ever You Want To Call Them I agree With You There So many Come The Hell on
12/30/2015 c1 Dratias
One word. Spaces.

I would HIGHLY recommend using the Enter and Shift key and do a bit of editing to this story. It looked like it was very nice, but my eyes literally cannot read huge blocks of words anymore. It all blurs together. I really hope you might add the spaces some day, I really wanted to read this...
8/3/2015 c1 kamrenssj3
awesomethat there should be more people out there that have your Christmas gift and make these storistories
11/30/2014 c1 Guest
awesome oneshot
11/7/2014 c1 4lizerbell86
Gohan and Lime need to be explored more...love it
10/19/2014 c1 20SaiyatonianSage
I like this story although the only criticism I have is: try to break up the passage a bit, like in paragraphs. It's kind of hard to read this in one swoop.

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