
10/11/2016 c2
18Turtle Kid the Woolgatherer
I have no idea how Fran is going to pull this off, but I'm rooting for him!

I have no idea how Fran is going to pull this off, but I'm rooting for him!
8/14/2016 c2 einargs
Interesting. Not quite sure where this is going, but you definitely have my attention.
Interesting. Not quite sure where this is going, but you definitely have my attention.
6/7/2016 c2
3kalmaegi
I love how much of a little shit Fran still is. It just goes to show it's his personality to be as annoying as possible.

I love how much of a little shit Fran still is. It just goes to show it's his personality to be as annoying as possible.
3/26/2016 c2 book14reader
Ah Fran. It's nice to see a non-dysfunction teaching relationship in khr. So where is he going next? Seeing as non of the ninth's sons are killed yet, there should be at least 2 years? Not too sure how much time it took to kill of all 3 sons...
Ah Fran. It's nice to see a non-dysfunction teaching relationship in khr. So where is he going next? Seeing as non of the ninth's sons are killed yet, there should be at least 2 years? Not too sure how much time it took to kill of all 3 sons...
5/8/2015 c2
2richboylion
I'm guessing that mukuro died of the estrano because he isn't the guardian anymore so chrome is also dead I assume

I'm guessing that mukuro died of the estrano because he isn't the guardian anymore so chrome is also dead I assume
5/8/2015 c1
3Tre Corde
Neat idea. Fran's an interesting character, definitely worth exploring.
Just a heads up, regarding Lal's brief foray into Mandarin:
Zhè shì zhōngguó - actually means "This is China." Lal probably intended something more of the lines of "Zhè shì zhōngwén" which means "This is Chinese."

Neat idea. Fran's an interesting character, definitely worth exploring.
Just a heads up, regarding Lal's brief foray into Mandarin:
Zhè shì zhōngguó - actually means "This is China." Lal probably intended something more of the lines of "Zhè shì zhōngwén" which means "This is Chinese."
11/10/2014 c1
1Failing Wings
This idea looks very interesting, I'm interested in what happened to make Mist users so rare, did it have to do with the Estrano? Does Mukuro and Chrome exist in this world. I look forward to you updates.

This idea looks very interesting, I'm interested in what happened to make Mist users so rare, did it have to do with the Estrano? Does Mukuro and Chrome exist in this world. I look forward to you updates.
5/14/2014 c1 book14reader
so he impressed people with his illusions, and he still does not know whats mist flame is. nice.
so he impressed people with his illusions, and he still does not know whats mist flame is. nice.