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8/5 c1 alicia7788
UPDATE PLEASE
6/8/2019 c1 XXX-Rose-of-deathXXX
Please update
12/21/2018 c1 rowenasheir
Where are ch. 2 to13?
8/20/2018 c1 FuntimeFreddy777
I loved it so much! Even though she was ten it is very interesting. Keep in mind that Game of Thrones and other things similar have underage sex and marriage as well. Don’t let anyone get to you about it.
Anyway, it’s FanFiction and your story, besides it the Wizarding world, nobody knows if it accepts that or not.

Thanks for cheering me up with this cool story! Please update!
4/29/2018 c1 Lucky Lucy Heart
PLEASE UPDATE! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE this story! The plot is AWESOME and your writing is AMAZING! I can’t wait to read the next chapter and I hope you upload it SOON!
2/16/2017 c1 CharitinaX
Child pornography/sex is heavily frowned upon by most societies around the world (and faces legal consequences). By writing something like this you are condoning what is essentially pedophilia.

Please rewrite this and remind yourself of these principles and your country's laws before you do something like this again. It's quite frankly disgusting to read about.
11/25/2016 c1 EverRose808
Um... it's kind of awkward to read mild smut/fluff and you write letting him work her mother open... did you mean to write mouth?
3/21/2016 c1 Gal
Please continue this story!
1/1/2016 c1 5Mila Pink
I like this.
You should continuos read this story.
Kiss
2/16/2015 c1 5FanfictionIsAWayOfLife
This seems like this could be a very interesting story. I like what you have so far, and would like to read more *hint hint wink wink*
1/20/2015 c1 Rainy-Round
I don't know if this is a one shot or not but it is pretty interesting. SO I hope it's not a one shot and the you r
regularly or at least somewhat regularly update it.

interested in reading more,

Rainy-Round
11/29/2014 c1 Luana LS
An incredible start. I'm happy to have read and be able to follow the story, but I have to ask: When the next chapter out? This story seems so promising! I love it.
10/9/2014 c1 approximationOfhumanity
Does the same clause apply to him? It would be extremely stupid of him to tie his hands like that without responding in kind.
9/27/2014 c1 Aiko
When are you going to update this story? It's really good!
9/24/2014 c1 s
Update soon plz
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