for Lines of Death4/13/2014 c1 
4vampires are awesome
This is an interesting story. I would like to know if there is a correlation between the death of her parents and the lines on her face. The chapter is well written and the sentence structuring and the grammar is perfect. I hope you update again soon.
Ciao
4vampires are awesomeThis is an interesting story. I would like to know if there is a correlation between the death of her parents and the lines on her face. The chapter is well written and the sentence structuring and the grammar is perfect. I hope you update again soon.
Ciao
4/13/2014 c1 First Lady Lestat
interesting start can't wait to see where this goes hurry back with more soon.
interesting start can't wait to see where this goes hurry back with more soon.
4/13/2014 c1 Guest
Not only is your OC a cringeworthy Mary Sue, but Tom is painfully out of character. Have you even read the books? Do you understand who the characters are, or are you just slapping their names on to obnoxious, poorly-written OCs?
Not only is your OC a cringeworthy Mary Sue, but Tom is painfully out of character. Have you even read the books? Do you understand who the characters are, or are you just slapping their names on to obnoxious, poorly-written OCs?