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4/14/2014 c1 9horus100
esta bien el fic ,espero que hagas lemmon
4/13/2014 c1 4vampires are awesome
This is an interesting story. I would like to know if there is a correlation between the death of her parents and the lines on her face. The chapter is well written and the sentence structuring and the grammar is perfect. I hope you update again soon.
Ciao
4/13/2014 c1 First Lady Lestat
interesting start can't wait to see where this goes hurry back with more soon.
4/13/2014 c1 Guest
Not only is your OC a cringeworthy Mary Sue, but Tom is painfully out of character. Have you even read the books? Do you understand who the characters are, or are you just slapping their names on to obnoxious, poorly-written OCs?
4/13/2014 c1 2ptl4ever419
Love it! In super interested on the lines on her checks :)
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