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5/10/2016 c4 woodenwall
WTF The doctor said "I'm afraid so" shouldn't he be congratulating them.
5/9/2016 c1 woodenwall
the car was specified
8/19/2015 c2 26eisceire
Unknown could be Megurine Luka. Nice complexity of relationships and shifts of feelings. Varying points of view good way of adding layers and controlling story.

For the content of the story the writing is more dry and correct than fits the context. So tough to write sex scenes that don't sound like every other sex scene but the Kaito/Miku tangle could've been pasted from almost any soft porn on net.

You have the meal but could stand to buff up the presentation.
6/14/2014 c6 Changed to another account
Meiko is a Bitch D:
Hello i love this fanfic since the first chapter :c yes i read it since you published the first chapter but i was in the shadows without review xD
6/14/2014 c6 1rinxlenfan4ever
...MIKU, KAITO, LEN, RIN, GET SOME FLAMETHROWERS! And, haha, fuck you, Piko! :3
6/2/2014 c5 rinxlenfan4ever
NEXT CHAPTERRR! ASAP!
5/24/2014 c5 1barroowii2
Oh no, Meiko! First Miku and now Rin?!
5/14/2014 c4 Guest
Please update this!
4/24/2014 c3 Kirino-san
Bitchy Meiko on the way! Nice story bud!
4/18/2014 c2 3Kagamine-RinCVO2
I BET IT WILL BE MEIKO!HE HE HE make more
4/14/2014 c1 hatelife
I think Len likes Rin but he's using Miku because he can't date his sister, while Rin likes genuinely likes Katio but knows Kaito and Miku likes each other. Now what I don't understand why Miku and Kaito just don't date already. But the drama between Len and Rin seems more interesting.

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