
4/14/2014 c1 Katconan
I thought it was good. The only problem with it was Snape was working for Dumbledore so would have turned Harry in.
I thought it was good. The only problem with it was Snape was working for Dumbledore so would have turned Harry in.
4/14/2014 c1
5JuliaPossum
I like it, I like it a lot! That click click boom thing you had going on there? Perfect.
The way the story was written, you could just see Harry breaking. I also like the way you presented the 'light' characters so that they were really subtlety being obviously evil, if you know what I mean.
All in all, a great one shot and a really good start to your one shot writing 'career'.
I can't wait to see more!

I like it, I like it a lot! That click click boom thing you had going on there? Perfect.
The way the story was written, you could just see Harry breaking. I also like the way you presented the 'light' characters so that they were really subtlety being obviously evil, if you know what I mean.
All in all, a great one shot and a really good start to your one shot writing 'career'.
I can't wait to see more!