
9/6/2015 c1
15Allfather-Ford
Not bad for a one-shot with the descriptions of the destruction by a leviathan, still need some work, but it's okay.
Seeing its release before the actual movie, yeah Godzilla turned out to be less destructive in this version unless in self-defense rather than casual rampage.

Not bad for a one-shot with the descriptions of the destruction by a leviathan, still need some work, but it's okay.
Seeing its release before the actual movie, yeah Godzilla turned out to be less destructive in this version unless in self-defense rather than casual rampage.
4/19/2014 c1 Dr.OKTOBERFEST
This is a great piece of work. Very descriptive with what happened to the city but with a few errors. First of all, typhoon and hurricane are the exact same thing. They are called differently only from different parts of the world. Next, the part where you wrote Godzilla saw nothing but rubble. Since this is a first person, that should not have been there. And its charcoal grey. But mistakes aside, this did a well job of establishing the Godzilla in the 2014 movie. 8/10
This is a great piece of work. Very descriptive with what happened to the city but with a few errors. First of all, typhoon and hurricane are the exact same thing. They are called differently only from different parts of the world. Next, the part where you wrote Godzilla saw nothing but rubble. Since this is a first person, that should not have been there. And its charcoal grey. But mistakes aside, this did a well job of establishing the Godzilla in the 2014 movie. 8/10