for The Ocean Inside Me7/13/2014 c2 midnitereader
Hey you haven't updated in a while. This could be an interesting story. A Merman, huh? Hope you continue this.
Hey you haven't updated in a while. This could be an interesting story. A Merman, huh? Hope you continue this.
6/14/2014 c2 left in bits
I wanted to give you some kudos for your writing! It's very descriptive and emotive. I really liked this twist here, too. For some reason the fact that it took on a supernatural element just made it even better. Great job!
I wanted to give you some kudos for your writing! It's very descriptive and emotive. I really liked this twist here, too. For some reason the fact that it took on a supernatural element just made it even better. Great job!
4/15/2014 c1 midnitereader
OMG, this sounds so sad. Bella's father loved her, but Phil sounds just evil. Molesting her and then selling her. He sounds like a pimp. And her mother regretting having her and then not believing her about Phil. No wonder she wants to die. Is this the end?
OMG, this sounds so sad. Bella's father loved her, but Phil sounds just evil. Molesting her and then selling her. He sounds like a pimp. And her mother regretting having her and then not believing her about Phil. No wonder she wants to die. Is this the end?
4/14/2014 c1 Vampir3.S3duction
Please don't let it be the end! I wanna read more and see if or who she might get entangled with, lol.
Please don't let it be the end! I wanna read more and see if or who she might get entangled with, lol.