for Gender Potion12/5/2020 c7 Guest
This... this story is so bad. I’m sorry, but... No.
The constant self inserts between brackets during the story are really annoying. None of the characters are written correctly. I called it a day after you gave Byakuya a girly scream out of nowhere like... come on.
There’s no effort put into this because you didn’t even try to write the characters in tune with their personalities.
Very cringe.
This... this story is so bad. I’m sorry, but... No.
The constant self inserts between brackets during the story are really annoying. None of the characters are written correctly. I called it a day after you gave Byakuya a girly scream out of nowhere like... come on.
There’s no effort put into this because you didn’t even try to write the characters in tune with their personalities.
Very cringe.
5/8/2016 c3 Guest
Oh? Putting in the " Oh we're going shopping because your a female now cliche?" Well I'm gone this is actually quite terrible when cliche. No doubt now that I've seen it. Unfortunately now burned into my brain thanks..
Oh? Putting in the " Oh we're going shopping because your a female now cliche?" Well I'm gone this is actually quite terrible when cliche. No doubt now that I've seen it. Unfortunately now burned into my brain thanks..
2/2/2016 c4 Guest
One thing.. This story is horrible.. Despite the title giving off a good vibe of how good this story would be but.. All I got was disappointment considering you took nothing into consideration of the bleach series along with how ichigo behaves now.. I'd also like to mention it looks like it was written by a frantic fan girl who wanted attention for their own story.
One thing.. This story is horrible.. Despite the title giving off a good vibe of how good this story would be but.. All I got was disappointment considering you took nothing into consideration of the bleach series along with how ichigo behaves now.. I'd also like to mention it looks like it was written by a frantic fan girl who wanted attention for their own story.
12/28/2014 c12 Heavenly God
whoa! that was short. is there any story that is better than this? please tell me
whoa! that was short. is there any story that is better than this? please tell me
11/17/2014 c11 
28Kurosaki-Shiba Mitsuki
hello
Oh So Ichigo have chosen to stay in Version daughter how will react Toshirô.
At the same time I understand what you think Ichigo act as a girl and find this boy again ern be too weird.
Especially as it is so likely to be more feminine change to Ichigo so annoying ...
It is the combination of shinigami woman who'll be happy
I wonder how he will do with the human body ichigo?
The reaction Isshin and friends
I look forward to read more
28Kurosaki-Shiba Mitsukihello
Oh So Ichigo have chosen to stay in Version daughter how will react Toshirô.
At the same time I understand what you think Ichigo act as a girl and find this boy again ern be too weird.
Especially as it is so likely to be more feminine change to Ichigo so annoying ...
It is the combination of shinigami woman who'll be happy
I wonder how he will do with the human body ichigo?
The reaction Isshin and friends
I look forward to read more
7/5/2014 c10 Guest
Wow... Surprise ending to this chapter
Wow... Surprise ending to this chapter
7/5/2014 c10 7Black Bankai
wow that was awesome It is funny what Rangiku did to Ichigo In this story and how things turned out and in that one Chapter were you put Kuchiki and said you were going to leave it like it was you spelled it correct
7Black Bankaiwow that was awesome It is funny what Rangiku did to Ichigo In this story and how things turned out and in that one Chapter were you put Kuchiki and said you were going to leave it like it was you spelled it correct
7/4/2014 c10 Heavenly God
i feel pity for her. but i think ichigo and byakuya is perfect couple other than that toshiro and ichigo are also perfect. but i want byakuya and ichigo beside they're so cute
i feel pity for her. but i think ichigo and byakuya is perfect couple other than that toshiro and ichigo are also perfect. but i want byakuya and ichigo beside they're so cute
6/26/2014 c8 Heavenly God
wow i thought byakuya don't like her but i guess he is. now i think about it byakuya is kinda prideful to everything. and by the way you don't need to sorry about cause all i want is to read the next chapter.
wow i thought byakuya don't like her but i guess he is. now i think about it byakuya is kinda prideful to everything. and by the way you don't need to sorry about cause all i want is to read the next chapter.
6/20/2014 c7 KageAkuma5020
Lol xD awesome! Byakuya! Its just cute :3 not as cute as IchiHitsu, but cute :3
Lol xD awesome! Byakuya! Its just cute :3 not as cute as IchiHitsu, but cute :3
6/18/2014 c7 keirans93
the whole dating thing could start off with bya-kun but when they go on a date to say the real world aizen kidnaps ichigo etc etc and the hero to break in and save ichigo could be toshiro or even 1 off the espada say grimmjaw frees her,that could give you a lot more ideas/ story length
the whole dating thing could start off with bya-kun but when they go on a date to say the real world aizen kidnaps ichigo etc etc and the hero to break in and save ichigo could be toshiro or even 1 off the espada say grimmjaw frees her,that could give you a lot more ideas/ story length
6/20/2014 c7 2LazyFoxLover
Byakuya for the date :3 I think it'll be cute and two captains fighting over her would be awesome hehe
2LazyFoxLoverByakuya for the date :3 I think it'll be cute and two captains fighting over her would be awesome hehe