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6/19/2018 c15 1Delta2059
Damn. Kinda shocked but damn was it nail biting. Great job! :)
2/27/2018 c1 Kailyn Bailey
Your a great writer you should write a novel
8/17/2017 c15 Qtsarahanne
Great story thank you for writing it!
7/19/2017 c15 2acetwolf94
I LIKE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!
2/11/2017 c6 agilina1
D-A-M-N! FOUR IS FUCKED UP!
2/6/2017 c1 doyouseewhatisee
though author, you did great. I know you will enjoy writing more stories.
2/6/2017 c15 doyouseewhatisee
I honestly didn't like the story. too dark.
4/27/2016 c6 1jamie.lauria.79
Wow, such a Yandere Four u wrote in here. Don't know what Yandere means? Ah well. Ur an amazing writer!
10/21/2015 c15 sharon.mayes.353
I had a feeling Four didn't die
10/5/2015 c1 Guest
With brown hair and blue eyes, is Kilian Four's son?
10/5/2015 c15 jcampbell943
Interesting way to end it. I like that you left it open to potentially come back. Not what I was expecting...
10/4/2015 c15 Libra18j
I hate these kind of endings...always leaves you wanting more...geez I thought 4 was gone for good...good job!
10/4/2015 c15 8Annie0801
Wow! That was great. I have really enjoyed your story. Sorry to see it end but all good things eventually do. Hope you do get a chance to do a sequel sometime! :-)
10/1/2015 c14 lady Abbiss
Thank you for the update, and closure to the story. Wishing for an epilogue!
10/1/2015 c14 jcampbell943
I really don't think an epilogue is needed my dear. By all means I will read it...but if you are truly out of steam for this story I must say you ended it perfectly and truly brought it full circle with the title showing through brightly.

As for the remainder of this chapter I'm happy that Eric never lost faith in Tris...through her coma and through her mental/physical rehabilitation. I love that though she didn't say it he knew what she meant.

I also loved that Max became a father figure to both Eric and Tris.

Kuddos.
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