for PMD Explorers of Life: Steven's Story2/17/2015 c3 
1UnholyPens
Ok. That was sudden. Well, nice chapter on this one, but I, of course, am too lazy to spot them out for you!
1UnholyPensOk. That was sudden. Well, nice chapter on this one, but I, of course, am too lazy to spot them out for you!
2/17/2015 c2 UnholyPens
I know what happened!
Warning: do not read further if you do not wish for spoilers.
The Dimensional scream!
I know what happened!
Warning: do not read further if you do not wish for spoilers.
The Dimensional scream!
1/30/2015 c3 Sega Nesquik
Hey, man. It's me, too lazy to log in. Anyway, I noticed that you spelt Celebi's name wrong. That aside, another wonderful chapter, and happy belated birthday to you.
Hey, man. It's me, too lazy to log in. Anyway, I noticed that you spelt Celebi's name wrong. That aside, another wonderful chapter, and happy belated birthday to you.
1/29/2015 c1 UnholyPens
Nice chapte roversll, although, there were a few grammatical errors, as you will find here:
1: "Why did I have to be born into this family god?" Um, I think it should be "family, God?"
2: "Not terrified in anyway" I believe you mean "Any Way"?
3: "Continue on Chosen." Again, a comma before Chosen.
4: "Cave I cold see" ok, I believe it is "cave, I could see"
5: "Giant gecko?" Period, not question mark.
6: "I still had clothes on but I was to busy" lol, it's a comma in between "on" and "but". Also, it is "too",not "to"
Now, on to the good parts! I love the design of this, how the character isn't a pokemon yet, but might become one soon. I love this concept, and do look forward to reading more!
Nice chapte roversll, although, there were a few grammatical errors, as you will find here:
1: "Why did I have to be born into this family god?" Um, I think it should be "family, God?"
2: "Not terrified in anyway" I believe you mean "Any Way"?
3: "Continue on Chosen." Again, a comma before Chosen.
4: "Cave I cold see" ok, I believe it is "cave, I could see"
5: "Giant gecko?" Period, not question mark.
6: "I still had clothes on but I was to busy" lol, it's a comma in between "on" and "but". Also, it is "too",not "to"
Now, on to the good parts! I love the design of this, how the character isn't a pokemon yet, but might become one soon. I love this concept, and do look forward to reading more!
5/8/2014 c2 1LilacFlowinn
I hate Dusknoir, I mean the character in the games. He acts like such a hero but then turns out to be one heck of a bastard. But the pokemon itself is pretty epic...
1LilacFlowinnI hate Dusknoir, I mean the character in the games. He acts like such a hero but then turns out to be one heck of a bastard. But the pokemon itself is pretty epic...
5/7/2014 c2 Tessler
I can't think of anything as to what happened to Steve. Even though it's probably too obvious, and I can't see it right now. Oh, well. Can't wait to read what happens next.
I can't think of anything as to what happened to Steve. Even though it's probably too obvious, and I can't see it right now. Oh, well. Can't wait to read what happens next.
4/30/2014 c1 N-Badger97
So I just finished your reading your other story, so I started reading this one. I gotta say I really like them. Keep up the good work!
So I just finished your reading your other story, so I started reading this one. I gotta say I really like them. Keep up the good work!