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2/17/2015 c3 1UnholyPens
Ok. That was sudden. Well, nice chapter on this one, but I, of course, am too lazy to spot them out for you!
2/17/2015 c2 UnholyPens
I know what happened!

Warning: do not read further if you do not wish for spoilers.

The Dimensional scream!
1/30/2015 c3 Sega Nesquik
Hey, man. It's me, too lazy to log in. Anyway, I noticed that you spelt Celebi's name wrong. That aside, another wonderful chapter, and happy belated birthday to you.
1/29/2015 c1 UnholyPens
Nice chapte roversll, although, there were a few grammatical errors, as you will find here:
1: "Why did I have to be born into this family god?" Um, I think it should be "family, God?"
2: "Not terrified in anyway" I believe you mean "Any Way"?
3: "Continue on Chosen." Again, a comma before Chosen.
4: "Cave I cold see" ok, I believe it is "cave, I could see"
5: "Giant gecko?" Period, not question mark.
6: "I still had clothes on but I was to busy" lol, it's a comma in between "on" and "but". Also, it is "too",not "to"
Now, on to the good parts! I love the design of this, how the character isn't a pokemon yet, but might become one soon. I love this concept, and do look forward to reading more!
5/8/2014 c2 1LilacFlowinn
I hate Dusknoir, I mean the character in the games. He acts like such a hero but then turns out to be one heck of a bastard. But the pokemon itself is pretty epic...
5/7/2014 c2 Tessler
I can't think of anything as to what happened to Steve. Even though it's probably too obvious, and I can't see it right now. Oh, well. Can't wait to read what happens next.
5/7/2014 c1 Tessler
Well, this looks fairly interesting. Looking forward to the next chapter.
4/30/2014 c1 N-Badger97
So I just finished your reading your other story, so I started reading this one. I gotta say I really like them. Keep up the good work!
4/23/2014 c1 Fearofbeans
A fantastic start to a new story.
4/19/2014 c1 dreadscot1337
Not a bad start. Looking forward to seeing more

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