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6/15/2020 c5 Bailey
Will there be more chapters?
12/27/2018 c1 1AieraDynamic
Wow. This is so good! Please continue!
12/21/2018 c5 WolfSaven
Pleeeaaaase continue! It's really good!
1/23/2016 c5 Mystery
This. Was. Amazing! Please continue it, if you haven't moved onto other things. I love the concept, and the writing was so good I didn't even mind it was in present tense, it actually made it better!
8/9/2015 c5 Guest
Love this story so far! are you planning on updating anytime soon? please do
1/30/2015 c1 26Retronym
Is this fanfic discontinued? Because I quite enjoyed reading it.
7/6/2014 c4 3Pit'sSexyWifeNikki66
Pit was super cute, once again. Anyway, still very interesting and well written.
5/11/2014 c3 91Paradigm of Writing
So, first off; Pit was just freaking aborable. I want to squeeze him sooooo tight. Is it bad that I just do not like Hagrid? Something about how you've written him in this story is a little off-putting. Also, noted; do not put bold in the middle of the chapter unless it is for a very specific, and substantial reason. Leave bold for author notes at the beginning and end of the chapter. Grammar is decent since you know more than I do about it, but now you need to delve back into the description part of the story as well. I'll give this a 9/10. If you need my help, on reading over; I'll gladly do so.

5/7/2014 c2 3Pit'sSexyWifeNikki66
Very interesting, I'll definitely be coming back once this is updated.
4/26/2014 c2 2hetaliarose123
Great story so far!

Just curious, what year is this in? I'm guessing year three due to the 'dark creatures', but I want to be sure.

Please write more soon!

4/25/2014 c2 5Knight25
Okay, this is getting interesting.
Keep up the good work.
4/23/2014 c1 Knight25
Interesting story!

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