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2Jack Inqu
This chapter made me cry; hit a little too close to home. Very well done though.
Take care, good luck, stay safe, stay healthy, and I look forward to your next update.
2Jack InquThis chapter made me cry; hit a little too close to home. Very well done though.
Take care, good luck, stay safe, stay healthy, and I look forward to your next update.
11/14 c46 irgendwe
Her going with Gordon doesn't really make sense
She knows that he doesn't like her and he acts unnatural
He has no reason to be nice, she knows his personality
But she isn't at all suspicious, even though she is suspicious of every rentall car, something you specifically pointed out
Why did you write it like this?
Her going with Gordon doesn't really make sense
She knows that he doesn't like her and he acts unnatural
He has no reason to be nice, she knows his personality
But she isn't at all suspicious, even though she is suspicious of every rentall car, something you specifically pointed out
Why did you write it like this?
11/12 c60 HeWhoShouldn'tBeNamed
Is the reason Taylor doesn't have her power because QA is in Danny? it makes sense that aster could use her shard, because it doesn't exist yet. but Taylor's does.
Is the reason Taylor doesn't have her power because QA is in Danny? it makes sense that aster could use her shard, because it doesn't exist yet. but Taylor's does.
11/10 c60 Guest
Looking forward to the next chapter
Looking forward to the next chapter