for The Heat of Fire4/13/2016 c1 KatsukiCrimsonSnow
this is so good the metaphor of fire and a volcano LMAO but yes please continue your writing is absolutely insane i love it ; -)
this is so good the metaphor of fire and a volcano LMAO but yes please continue your writing is absolutely insane i love it ; -)
2/2/2016 c1 Candy
Can you do one in mukuros point of view please
Can you do one in mukuros point of view please
12/21/2015 c1 Guest
Wheeew! \\\\\
Wheeew! \\\\\
6/6/2015 c1 Kahlua
Please write more 6996 smut or bdsm oneshots id even pay to read
Please write more 6996 smut or bdsm oneshots id even pay to read
6/6/2015 c1 Kahlua
Please write more one shots of smut or bdsm for 6996, id even pay to read it
Please write more one shots of smut or bdsm for 6996, id even pay to read it
2/5/2015 c1 guest
When are you planning to continue this
When are you planning to continue this
1/5/2015 c1 Guest
TTTT I have no words, but please, keep going with it.
TTTT I have no words, but please, keep going with it.
10/23/2014 c1 ari
oh christ. that was incredible. thank you so much for this.
oh christ. that was incredible. thank you so much for this.
7/20/2014 c1 
27Orcux
OMYGODDDDD THAT WAS AWESOME DUDE! I completely forgot about the PWP challenge actually ehehehe sorry about that.. What was my challenge again?! O.O oh no! Was it 1827 or something?! LOL. ANYWAY DUDE YOU KNOW I DONT USUALLY READ HETERO BUT THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL XDDD OH CHROME I WISH I WERE YOU (at the mercy of Mukuro all day long XDDD HAHAHA)
I love how you showcased Mukuro's... magical skills too LOL SEXY MAGICAL BEAST WHAT MORE COULD A GIRL WISH FOR!
WRITE ON MAN YOU BE AWESOME
27OrcuxOMYGODDDDD THAT WAS AWESOME DUDE! I completely forgot about the PWP challenge actually ehehehe sorry about that.. What was my challenge again?! O.O oh no! Was it 1827 or something?! LOL. ANYWAY DUDE YOU KNOW I DONT USUALLY READ HETERO BUT THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL XDDD OH CHROME I WISH I WERE YOU (at the mercy of Mukuro all day long XDDD HAHAHA)
I love how you showcased Mukuro's... magical skills too LOL SEXY MAGICAL BEAST WHAT MORE COULD A GIRL WISH FOR!
WRITE ON MAN YOU BE AWESOME
6/15/2014 c1 okami-onna
You can't be serious!, I was waiting for more sinful wickedness. And I really wanted them to kiss, too. I totally loved it!. Please from me that you'll continue it, please!. Sorry if you find a mistake, my mother language is Spanish so…
Greetings from Mexico!
You can't be serious!, I was waiting for more sinful wickedness. And I really wanted them to kiss, too. I totally loved it!. Please from me that you'll continue it, please!. Sorry if you find a mistake, my mother language is Spanish so…
Greetings from Mexico!
6/13/2014 c1 Titti R
Erotic, fascinating and very well written. I loved it, and you should really continue it.
Erotic, fascinating and very well written. I loved it, and you should really continue it.
6/9/2014 c1 anonymous
yummy! \o/ But, status: complete ? Duh! I pray for a continuation Let it be a Double-Shot! Please talented author. Please.
yummy! \o/ But, status: complete ? Duh! I pray for a continuation Let it be a Double-Shot! Please talented author. Please.
5/18/2014 c1 ael fyragh
i would say that this fic is a very good match with fic Ambrosia (pair: hibari x haru).
it both shows the men on their 'predator mode' and very good at picturing them correctly.
aaaa i hope you actually make the second part!
i would say that this fic is a very good match with fic Ambrosia (pair: hibari x haru).
it both shows the men on their 'predator mode' and very good at picturing them correctly.
aaaa i hope you actually make the second part!
4/22/2014 c1 Maashiro
May I mentally pict the Chrome on your fanfic as like when she was still Nagi, bringing back the appearance of a petit girl with huge purple eyes and long black hair with an image that is very much Chitanda-esque ?
Anyway, lovely -hot- writing, I like that he's an arrogant academic adult very aware of his own high intelligence but not her, uh may I have a fetiche !?, being actually a naive child very ingenue for her own age.
Yes, kimusume, let sensei teach you, there's still a lot of knowledge that you're so, so unaware of
Please don't hesitate to continue! I will be impatiently awaiting for the second (ehem... and most important) chapter.
May I mentally pict the Chrome on your fanfic as like when she was still Nagi, bringing back the appearance of a petit girl with huge purple eyes and long black hair with an image that is very much Chitanda-esque ?
Anyway, lovely -hot- writing, I like that he's an arrogant academic adult very aware of his own high intelligence but not her, uh may I have a fetiche !?, being actually a naive child very ingenue for her own age.
Yes, kimusume, let sensei teach you, there's still a lot of knowledge that you're so, so unaware of
Please don't hesitate to continue! I will be impatiently awaiting for the second (ehem... and most important) chapter.