for break my heart into pieces on the floor12/30/2017 c1 DarknessAndDeath
I don't ship Jemma/Grant, but I do ship Skitz. I really enjoyed the longness as well as Grant POV. I like how Jemma betrayal affected the team especially Grant, Skye and Leo. Poor Leo. I enjoyed the Grant/Leo/Skye interaction. I like the Jemma/Grant escape scene as well as their other scenes. I really enjoyed how Grant was looking out for Leo and Skye. I like that Jemma was a hydra agent plus a triple agent. I really enjoyed it and you should be very proud. Thank you for writing and uploading this. Great work.
I don't ship Jemma/Grant, but I do ship Skitz. I really enjoyed the longness as well as Grant POV. I like how Jemma betrayal affected the team especially Grant, Skye and Leo. Poor Leo. I enjoyed the Grant/Leo/Skye interaction. I like the Jemma/Grant escape scene as well as their other scenes. I really enjoyed how Grant was looking out for Leo and Skye. I like that Jemma was a hydra agent plus a triple agent. I really enjoyed it and you should be very proud. Thank you for writing and uploading this. Great work.
1/26/2015 c1 
12MoonIce20408
This was just plot twist after plot twist after plot twist! Amazing story!
12MoonIce20408This was just plot twist after plot twist after plot twist! Amazing story!
1/2/2015 c1 Enchanted19
WHAT? No resolution? Darn I was hoping for a happy ending! Great story though. I love how you did Jemma. Thinking about it, her being a bad-ass is actually pretty interesting. I wish it could've been like this on the show. I'm following, just in case you decide to continue. 3
WHAT? No resolution? Darn I was hoping for a happy ending! Great story though. I love how you did Jemma. Thinking about it, her being a bad-ass is actually pretty interesting. I wish it could've been like this on the show. I'm following, just in case you decide to continue. 3
4/24/2014 c1 Vlmka
Oh yes, here is the fanfiction. First fic literally eating my heart. I hurts. And it's so beautiful. But it hurts!
I love it.
Oh yes, here is the fanfiction. First fic literally eating my heart. I hurts. And it's so beautiful. But it hurts!
I love it.
4/24/2014 c1 Guest
no, No, NO! Actually, I really liked the ending. As much as my shipper heart wanted happily ever after, the story is perfect just the way it is.
no, No, NO! Actually, I really liked the ending. As much as my shipper heart wanted happily ever after, the story is perfect just the way it is.
4/24/2014 c1 a trace of amber
Oh my god! I LOVE THIS! You've taken the kind of throw away idea that Simmons could be Hydra and truly followed the pathway all the way through. I love that you used Ward as our perspective point and then to see Fitz and Skye really in pieces and realizing that Jemma was never, ever what anyone thought? Out of everyone on the bus I have to think that she would truly be the biggest punch in the gut! Ouch this hurt in the best possible way. It was just so utterly reasonable.
Oh my god! I LOVE THIS! You've taken the kind of throw away idea that Simmons could be Hydra and truly followed the pathway all the way through. I love that you used Ward as our perspective point and then to see Fitz and Skye really in pieces and realizing that Jemma was never, ever what anyone thought? Out of everyone on the bus I have to think that she would truly be the biggest punch in the gut! Ouch this hurt in the best possible way. It was just so utterly reasonable.
4/24/2014 c1 1Salkri Kachemench
Okay so I'm not a fan of the biospecialist pairing but that was so heartbreaking and sweet! Really sad, and incredibly powerful. I am in awe :)
1Salkri KachemenchOkay so I'm not a fan of the biospecialist pairing but that was so heartbreaking and sweet! Really sad, and incredibly powerful. I am in awe :)