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11/25/2023 c2 Christopherprime22
Gutman just taking a laser shot to the chest and not even reacting to it besides the smell is the most Ogryn reaction lmao
2/2/2021 c3 abcdeideadaccountaegegfdsgd
At first I was surprised that the main cast had been defeated and I immediately assumed that everyone but Valia died,

I'm a bit surprised she managed to defeat a chaos sorcerer and the part where a traitor marine was bludgeoned to death was kinda funny.

All in all I enjoyed it, though I'm a bit confused by the ending.
1/17/2021 c2 abcdeideadaccountaegegfdsgd
So Valia is having nightmares about her dead comrades, hopefully we get more insight into her back story as she seems to be the most developed of the bunch.
And we narrowly missed recreating Pavlov's House, which I personally think would have been really cool to do!
1/14/2021 c1 abcdeideadaccountaegegfdsgd
Alright, so we meet the cast in here, Valia and the Catachan seem to get the most introduction while the rest not so much.

I wonder if the Ogryn is a Bone'ead, considering he is operating outside of a squad of Ogryns and they aren't exactly known for their intelligence. I also wonder how come there's so many different regiments on this planet.
7/13/2017 c3 Guest
Please continue this story !
4/5/2017 c3 Berlioz Chaos Lord of Khorne
Every time. Every damn time. You put something in there that catches me off guard. I mean, I know it's T, but the XXX made me laugh more then if dick was out there.

xD

And a nice, cheery little ending to boot.

Next on the list, I have no fuckin' clue.

Time to go have a looksie.
4/5/2017 c3 Berlioz Chaos Lord of Khorne
Every time. Every damn time. You put something in there that catches me off guard. I mean, I know it's T, but the XXX made me laugh more then if dick was out there.

xD

And a nice, cheery little ending to boot.

Next on the list, I have no fuckin' clue.

Time to go have a looksie.
4/5/2017 c2 Berlioz Chaos Lord of Khorne
Lmao.

That banana doe.
4/5/2017 c1 Berlioz Chaos Lord of Khorne
:3

I don't hit follow, I get harassed, and it seems one of my favorite 40k authors has another 8 stories.

Ah well.

Decent little story thus far, although the length tells me it'll be small, but likely enjoyable as usual.

And no, I'm gonna read everyone story BUT the one I told you I would.

So there brown bear.

:)
6/13/2016 c3 29IGdude117
Awesome finale. Very well written- I found the bit referring to the one in ten chance of penetration to be pretty funny, as well as the sex scene between Slaneesh and the Emperor.

Great finish!
6/13/2016 c2 IGdude117
Good chapter. I'm enjoying the camaraderie between the soldiers, and Valia is a great protagonist that is as relatable as you can get in the universe of 40k.
6/13/2016 c1 IGdude117
Interesting introduction. It seems like you have a good grip on the character of each regiment, and I look forward to seeing how they interact.
2/11/2016 c1 Hext29
Really good story, read it in one go. Possible sequel?
7/15/2015 c3 4Tomoyuki Tanaka
Ha ha ha! I see you included some references to the tabletop game yourself! And um, well, that was kind of anticlimatic, but I guess Valia's laspistol hitting the guy and wounding him must have something to do with Valentine's psychic powers. Or not. I don't know.

And the Space Marines had to come down and save the poor Imperial Guardsmen once again. Oh well. Sigh. At least we tried.
7/15/2015 c2 Tomoyuki Tanaka
Valia isn't a coward. Rather, I bet people like her are more common among the Imperial Guard than say, Ciaphas Cain, who's just extraordinarily lucky (and extremely fun to read). Good to see you throwing the grimdark of them all into the story (Valia using her friend as a meat shield) and mixing in humor like the Orgyn's antics. The guy is awesome!
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