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8/14/2017 c2 43BenRG
For what it's worth, Dave? I think that you gave her peace - the one thing that she could never find and probably would never find alive. I wouldn't say that you killed her, though. Big Daddy killed her; you just stopped the corpse twitching in a way that would harm others.
4/15/2015 c2 Guest
I'm in tears you bastard
5/9/2014 c2 anotherboarduser
I think this story is well written, but the characterization is horrible.

I mean Dave is just so wrong in this.

Why didn't she try other options like MAKING IT CLEAR TO HER THAT IT HAS TO STOP OR SHE WOULD LOSE HIM, making her talk to a priest in a confessional or if possible - have her talk to a confidential therapist/psychologist.

Mindy is a UNDERAGED GIRL! Much of her mind is STILL being influenced by others - including him. Why don't he said they BOTH need to put limits to their crime fighting abilities in an absolutely clear and forceful way.

He's the older one-almost an adult. Mindy's the kid.

Dave isn't her guardian. His father was. He didn't do all that he could and should have done to help her! Instead he ended her. He played god with her when he shouldn't have. That Dave is despicable.
5/5/2014 c2 Guest
Omg. Wow... just... wow. Well played good sir.
5/3/2014 c2 SomeGuyFawkes
Note to self: "Pay attention when the fic is tagged 'Tragedy'".

I suppose there was no way that this fic was going to have a happy ending but, hey, it had a barely-pubescent girl as an unstoppable killing machine, so it wasn't much to hope it was unrealistic in other ways too. ;)

Well-enough done for it's genre, but I don't ever want to read something like it again.
5/3/2014 c2 kffs
Whoa.
5/3/2014 c2 3TaraLi
Damn. Just ... *DAMN*. Tough hit there.
5/3/2014 c2 Zikarn Krais
That last line really struck me.

Let's see what happens next.
5/1/2014 c1 WhiteTigerLilly
New meaning to good, clean fun. xD
4/27/2014 c1 Queensleyy
Wish you went into more detail about how they got together
4/26/2014 c1 SomeGuyFawkes
Child-porn lite! But it's with costumed psychopaths so it must be okay!

Seriously, it was an entertaining story, but somebody's going to have some hefty therapy bills - if they live long enough.

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