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7/23/2019 c2 Borello
damnit. the story is really interesting. i hoped to read more chapter.
1/3/2017 c2 1Xilonax Shiverflame
And I was looking forward to reading more of this fic...
12/17/2015 c2 Naruhinalover20
I am sad that this story wont be continue and hope 1 day that maybe you will but if you dont i can understand. Plz post another chapter if someone does adopt this story
12/16/2015 c2 jonale.fm
noooooooo...but hey at least you enjoyd writing the stories happy holidays
7/4/2015 c1 Megaplayer49
Please update this
11/3/2014 c1 Akuma-Heika
Considering he does not use a sword Magic Fighter would be a better descriptor.

If you are using gender specific terms than it would be Magister Magus and Minister Maga. Magi is the plural form of magus thus male but also used as a general term (in case of groups with both men and women)

Considering Negi’s fellow students were 17-22 when they graduated I am guessing Negi will be 4-7 when he graduates to compensate for him to keep the title of genius.

So Naruto is a once in a decade prodigy and Negi is a once in a century prodigy…considering he had the highest grades seen in a century.

What was Negi’s and Anya’s test?

Onee-chan call also mean young miss and thus be used by older people to refer to younger ones (teens to 20s)

Well this looks promising. Are you going to finish your earlier stories?
10/9/2014 c1 Xilonax Shiverflame
I'm going to love this fic.
10/4/2014 c1 uzuuchi007
Nice
7/25/2014 c1 whitecloud222
all i can say is lol
6/28/2014 c1 4The Sith'ari
Put Lemons in this story, it's a must with a harem!
5/28/2014 c1 DarkPirateKing69
Negima Xovers have tendency to drag on forever, since there is so much generic harem shenanigans in canon and authors use that as an excuse to do the same. it already happens with no more than 4-5 girls, let alone with something this massive.

not having any romance rushed is pretty damn lofty goal if he's gonna have around 30 girls or something.. you would need a chapter of this size per girl, just to flesh out their character and that's without adding any actual plot development in it. everyone has their own definition of 'romance' of course. it can be just a silly crush or genuine love with marriage and kids in mind.

and if there is M rating, but you're undecided in about writing lemons, then something else should make the rating stay. swearing and random ecchi moments doesn't qualify as M(A) rated stuff as far as i'm concerned. it can be changed back if you decide to write lemons or something else equally graphic.

obviously nothing has happened so far and all of the things i just mentioned are just personal thoughts of a random reader who couldn't write a good story to save his life. just had to get this stuff out of my system before i forgot what i was supposed to say.

looking forward to seeing how you will manage this and if i can take the fic seriously.. or at least remotely so.
5/2/2014 c1 2perseus peverell
Nice story but what about the other stories eagerly awaiting updates on the dxd story .
5/1/2014 c1 4animecollecter
so many girls from so many series...you didn't hold yourself back, impressive. looking forward to the next chapter.
4/30/2014 c1 Mr.PuffPuff
MMM tasty new fics!
4/28/2014 c1 Blackbalrog
you should add Kallen of code geass
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