for When Darkness Comes7/23/2014 c7 
12Justice237
Aww, this chapter was really sweet. I adore the little girl, and her mother is someone I hate already. But this chapter gives me some hope that there will be a light at then end of the long, dark, hard tunnel for our boy whom we all love.
Please tell me that there will be?
Also, sorry I didn't review the last chapter of this, I didn't really get round to it because I had exams and revision that was making me feel like I was in a trouser press, but I loved it all the same and I love this chapter even more. Keep this up!
Katie
12Justice237Aww, this chapter was really sweet. I adore the little girl, and her mother is someone I hate already. But this chapter gives me some hope that there will be a light at then end of the long, dark, hard tunnel for our boy whom we all love.
Please tell me that there will be?
Also, sorry I didn't review the last chapter of this, I didn't really get round to it because I had exams and revision that was making me feel like I was in a trouser press, but I loved it all the same and I love this chapter even more. Keep this up!
Katie
7/23/2014 c7 13Chanty420
Cosette and Enjolras! Stop making me feel so happy...not feeling the best today but this made my day...:)
13Chanty420Cosette and Enjolras! Stop making me feel so happy...not feeling the best today but this made my day...:)
6/26/2014 c6 Guest
I hope Enjolras won't do anything rash... Maybe it would have been better if Combeferre did join him on his walk outside. He is way too troubled to be on his own. Good writing, I really like this fanfic :)
I hope Enjolras won't do anything rash... Maybe it would have been better if Combeferre did join him on his walk outside. He is way too troubled to be on his own. Good writing, I really like this fanfic :)
6/23/2014 c6 Guest
You broke me
You broke me
6/22/2014 c6 84Rosebud5
I am crying. Literally. Tears are streaming down my face. This is... I have no words. This is so different from anything I've ever read about Les Amis, and it is breaking my heart. It it so artfully crafted, so stunning, so sad and terrible and heart breaking and I am so so glad I finally had time to read it. A fantastic, wrenching piece that needed written. Bravo.
Stay revolutionary.
Rosey
84Rosebud5I am crying. Literally. Tears are streaming down my face. This is... I have no words. This is so different from anything I've ever read about Les Amis, and it is breaking my heart. It it so artfully crafted, so stunning, so sad and terrible and heart breaking and I am so so glad I finally had time to read it. A fantastic, wrenching piece that needed written. Bravo.
Stay revolutionary.
Rosey
6/22/2014 c6 42Phoenixflames12
Thank you, thank you, thank you for updating this! This was beautifully haunting and your ability to make Enjolras slowly recede into himself is just heartbreaking but really, really well done. I do hope he manages to open up to Combeferre and Courfeyrac though and doesn't shut them out completely- but well done, really well done. All in all another stunning chapter my friend despite a few spelling errors but I'll forgive you those, please keep going and update when you can!
Much love,
Phoenixflames12 xxx
42Phoenixflames12Thank you, thank you, thank you for updating this! This was beautifully haunting and your ability to make Enjolras slowly recede into himself is just heartbreaking but really, really well done. I do hope he manages to open up to Combeferre and Courfeyrac though and doesn't shut them out completely- but well done, really well done. All in all another stunning chapter my friend despite a few spelling errors but I'll forgive you those, please keep going and update when you can!
Much love,
Phoenixflames12 xxx
6/21/2014 c6 Guest
I loved this chapter. The dream was terrifyingly real. And I really felt for Combeferre when Enjolras didn't want him to come outside with him. Please update soon again!
I loved this chapter. The dream was terrifyingly real. And I really felt for Combeferre when Enjolras didn't want him to come outside with him. Please update soon again!
6/21/2014 c6 Jen
This story is getting better with each chapter. I live how you give us more insight in the camps and lufe there without having Enjolras talk about it. It seems very in character and it really works. I still believe that this story should be read by more people. Not only is it a good read, but it's mostly a very important read. Every attempt to raise awareness to this subect deserves praise in itself. At leat that is whay I believe. Especially when the attempt is done as sensitive and honourable as yours. Well done, believe in yourself and keep going!
This story is getting better with each chapter. I live how you give us more insight in the camps and lufe there without having Enjolras talk about it. It seems very in character and it really works. I still believe that this story should be read by more people. Not only is it a good read, but it's mostly a very important read. Every attempt to raise awareness to this subect deserves praise in itself. At leat that is whay I believe. Especially when the attempt is done as sensitive and honourable as yours. Well done, believe in yourself and keep going!
6/21/2014 c6 21dancergrl1
As usual, a fabulous chapter. The way that it describes things that are historical in a way that can make sense to more people is fabulous. I'm actually Jewish, so having this story helps me think about what people I was related to, however distantly, went through both at the camps and their recovery if they survived. I ca't wait to see more.
21dancergrl1As usual, a fabulous chapter. The way that it describes things that are historical in a way that can make sense to more people is fabulous. I'm actually Jewish, so having this story helps me think about what people I was related to, however distantly, went through both at the camps and their recovery if they survived. I ca't wait to see more.
5/28/2014 c5 3The Grandeurs of Despair
I really love how you've been going about this story. I think you're right, Enjolras wouldn't just talk about what happened and I think the way you've been slowly hinting at what he went through is a really good way to describe it while still keeping him in character. I also really love the relationship you build between Enjolras and Combeferre, in all your stories, it's so genuine and beautiful. And I think that you handle the subject matter in this story really well, the fact that you're not trying to censor it or undermine it at all feels very real and... respectful, I guess would be a good word.
3The Grandeurs of DespairI really love how you've been going about this story. I think you're right, Enjolras wouldn't just talk about what happened and I think the way you've been slowly hinting at what he went through is a really good way to describe it while still keeping him in character. I also really love the relationship you build between Enjolras and Combeferre, in all your stories, it's so genuine and beautiful. And I think that you handle the subject matter in this story really well, the fact that you're not trying to censor it or undermine it at all feels very real and... respectful, I guess would be a good word.
5/23/2014 c5 Guest
... You have struck me speechless
... You have struck me speechless
5/23/2014 c5 Jen
Oh my gosh, this flashback made me shiver... It was horrible (in a good way) and you handled it perfectly. You don't overdramatize and you write it in such a way that it is tangible, it's imaginable and unimaginable at the same time. I loved this chapter as a whole, it was enlightening to see things from Enjolras' point of view and I think it was beautiful to have Courfeyrac be the believer here and at the same time showing us Enjolras' loss of faith. Another brilliant chapter. I agree with the other reviewers. This is te best story you've written so far. You can see that your heart really lies in here. You show us it's inportant to tell this story and you do it in a respectable, sensitive way. This deserves more credit and more attention.
Oh my gosh, this flashback made me shiver... It was horrible (in a good way) and you handled it perfectly. You don't overdramatize and you write it in such a way that it is tangible, it's imaginable and unimaginable at the same time. I loved this chapter as a whole, it was enlightening to see things from Enjolras' point of view and I think it was beautiful to have Courfeyrac be the believer here and at the same time showing us Enjolras' loss of faith. Another brilliant chapter. I agree with the other reviewers. This is te best story you've written so far. You can see that your heart really lies in here. You show us it's inportant to tell this story and you do it in a respectable, sensitive way. This deserves more credit and more attention.
5/23/2014 c5 12Justice237
Damn . . . you're breaking me up here. This has to easily be the most poignant thing you've ever written, by far. I can't believe that I can feel for people who are little more than words on a page, but what happened during the Holocaust was as real as real can be, and things like this very well could've happened.
. . . please tell me why you are not screenwriting for Hollywood blockbusters?
12Justice237Damn . . . you're breaking me up here. This has to easily be the most poignant thing you've ever written, by far. I can't believe that I can feel for people who are little more than words on a page, but what happened during the Holocaust was as real as real can be, and things like this very well could've happened.
. . . please tell me why you are not screenwriting for Hollywood blockbusters?
5/23/2014 c5 42Phoenixflames12
Oh my dear, this is wonderful! I can honestly say that this is quite probably the best chapter of anything you've written and I've read- it's glorious! I love the small, quiet moments between the trio and Courfeyrac's determination that things will get better, that amid all the darkness around them there still is hope, just about broke my heart. The flashback was beautifully handled- the way you manage Enjolras' breakage is painfully tangible and the sense of desperate fear is just gut-wrenching without being too over dramatic- very, very well done! Your description of Enjolras as 'the fiery phoenix of France' is simply stunning- beautiful writing Mon Ami!
Much love, keep going and update when you can!
Phoenixflames12 xxxx
42Phoenixflames12Oh my dear, this is wonderful! I can honestly say that this is quite probably the best chapter of anything you've written and I've read- it's glorious! I love the small, quiet moments between the trio and Courfeyrac's determination that things will get better, that amid all the darkness around them there still is hope, just about broke my heart. The flashback was beautifully handled- the way you manage Enjolras' breakage is painfully tangible and the sense of desperate fear is just gut-wrenching without being too over dramatic- very, very well done! Your description of Enjolras as 'the fiery phoenix of France' is simply stunning- beautiful writing Mon Ami!
Much love, keep going and update when you can!
Phoenixflames12 xxxx
5/23/2014 c5 33stagepageandscreen
The flashback was harrowing and heartbreaking, but so delicately handled. In fact, that is how I would say this hold narrative is being handled; delicately and expertly. You are a master and hurt/comfort, but this story is something else. It holds something deeper, something more than just 'feels'. It has a heart and a soul and is one of your finest pieces to date. The style you have of writing in the present tense is my one little problem. I can read it and enjoy it, but sometimes it just feels a little...odd? I don't know, just me being weird.
Keep going with this; put your soul into it and give it a story to tell and a message to spread. Well done, mon ami, well done!
SPAS or Libz
33stagepageandscreenThe flashback was harrowing and heartbreaking, but so delicately handled. In fact, that is how I would say this hold narrative is being handled; delicately and expertly. You are a master and hurt/comfort, but this story is something else. It holds something deeper, something more than just 'feels'. It has a heart and a soul and is one of your finest pieces to date. The style you have of writing in the present tense is my one little problem. I can read it and enjoy it, but sometimes it just feels a little...odd? I don't know, just me being weird.
Keep going with this; put your soul into it and give it a story to tell and a message to spread. Well done, mon ami, well done!
SPAS or Libz