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5/19/2015 c2 Herbwing
Update!
12/28/2014 c2 Guest
NUUUUUUUUUU! Just pointing out; I don't like larkstar because she's really mean! Plz make the kits survive! Update soon
6/28/2014 c2 1Perpetual Rainfall
Plz moar?:)
5/14/2014 c2 3Sky of the New Moon
Please please please continue! Pleeeeeaaaase? Awesome story!
5/11/2014 c2 xXFadingNightXx
Cliffhanger! D: but this stories amazing! :D
5/9/2014 c2 2Hollyblaze
I'm looking forward to the next chapter
5/8/2014 c2 71starlightwalking
Hope they live! This was Larkstar's idea, then, because of her thing with being strong?
5/8/2014 c1 starlightwalking
Great start! Very descriptive.
One note: 'Clan' is *always* capitalized, no matter what.

Cheers,
Gingeh
5/7/2014 c2 10clockwork marionette
*Paws
Oh no! Let's hope they survive! D: Survive kits survive! *Cheers*
5/6/2014 c2 Geminizoe
I was bit hesitant to read this at first, because the plot line of kits being sacrificed in the river was so overdone, but yours is a refreshing difference among those other stories and I'm eager to see where this is going. Grammar, sentence structure, detail and plot is what draws me to a story and I'm pleased to say that you have my attention and admiration of your talent. Great job :)
5/6/2014 c2 DELETEDACCOUNT333
Cliffhanger! Anyway, This chapter is awesome.
5/6/2014 c2 LeopardGecko01
Sooo... did they died?
5/6/2014 c2 Muwcow
I like your story so far. Its well written and has a decent premise. Please continue.
5/6/2014 c2 22Stuffed Watermelon
Continue!
5/6/2014 c2 I'mBlueDabadeedabadie03
How could you leave us at a cliffie?! Great story, keep writing!
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