
5/20/2014 c1 nikki
Good story keep it up
Good story keep it up
5/9/2014 c1 panther
Love your story
Love your story
5/9/2014 c1
1SA Jedi DC of Marvel
I like this. Her powers are cool. the first thing i thought of was sandman from the Guardians. she should learn to control her dust and somewhat use it to communicate like sandman.
Will we ever learn what the incident is?

I like this. Her powers are cool. the first thing i thought of was sandman from the Guardians. she should learn to control her dust and somewhat use it to communicate like sandman.
Will we ever learn what the incident is?
5/7/2014 c1 Guest
Good story
Good story
5/6/2014 c1 lucy xx
The oc in this story has such a cool power, I hope you write more about it :D
The oc in this story has such a cool power, I hope you write more about it :D
5/6/2014 c1 immagry
Hope you update this weekly cause readers will eat this up. Good job on writing.
Hope you update this weekly cause readers will eat this up. Good job on writing.
5/6/2014 c1 rockyess
The plot in this story sounds very interesting,and you are very good at writing, very descriptive.
The plot in this story sounds very interesting,and you are very good at writing, very descriptive.
5/6/2014 c1 Guest
Update soon please
Update soon please
5/3/2014 c1 Anonymous
This is so sad! I like the story though:-)
This is so sad! I like the story though:-)
5/4/2014 c1
7misswinterandsnow
I really love oc fanfics.
this is awesome I can't wait to see what her uncle will be like

I really love oc fanfics.
this is awesome I can't wait to see what her uncle will be like