for City of Clockwork11/29/2017 c1 Guest
I'm not even going to read the story I just want to comment because of the summary. If you hate Tessa and Clary then you really shouldn't be writing TMI or TID Fanfic. Just saying.
I'm not even going to read the story I just want to comment because of the summary. If you hate Tessa and Clary then you really shouldn't be writing TMI or TID Fanfic. Just saying.
12/27/2016 c1 Lisa Anderson
L.A: Wow... I've always thought that Tessa was a bit... er... well... I can't describe it... but you know... slight dislike. And Clary can't keep her nose out of other people's business.
Fangirl-y Part of my Brain: But... But Tessie and Clary are your besties. I SHIP WESSA AND CLACE SO **** HARD, YOU CAN'T IMAGINE!
Common Sense: Calm it!
L.A: Wow... I've always thought that Tessa was a bit... er... well... I can't describe it... but you know... slight dislike. And Clary can't keep her nose out of other people's business.
Fangirl-y Part of my Brain: But... But Tessie and Clary are your besties. I SHIP WESSA AND CLACE SO **** HARD, YOU CAN'T IMAGINE!
Common Sense: Calm it!
4/10/2015 c6 anonymousl7
Interesting chapter. Are you planning to bring Will and Jem into the story? I know you mentioned that was a possible outcome in chapter four.
Interesting chapter. Are you planning to bring Will and Jem into the story? I know you mentioned that was a possible outcome in chapter four.
4/3/2015 c5 anonymousl7
I love this story, especially the concept. I've always hated Tessa and disliked Clary. I also like how this story is more focused on Isabelle and Alec then the Mortal Instruments series is. Hope you update soon! :)
I love this story, especially the concept. I've always hated Tessa and disliked Clary. I also like how this story is more focused on Isabelle and Alec then the Mortal Instruments series is. Hope you update soon! :)
12/1/2014 c5 
5ThisSentenceIsALie
This is incredibly cool. There aren't any grammar or spelling things that I can see, but there could be a little more detail in the description. Like when Dorothea takes the fabric off the portal- it's a really important part and I just skimmed over it because it wasn't obviously important. Anywho, I love the Lightwoods, without Jace they get some spotlight, and I love the story.
5ThisSentenceIsALieThis is incredibly cool. There aren't any grammar or spelling things that I can see, but there could be a little more detail in the description. Like when Dorothea takes the fabric off the portal- it's a really important part and I just skimmed over it because it wasn't obviously important. Anywho, I love the Lightwoods, without Jace they get some spotlight, and I love the story.
10/12/2014 c4 TamarieRae
Wow. You wrote a fic that, judging by the summary, seemed to be based solely on bashing two characters that I rather like, and yet I still followed it. You took a concept I hated and turned it into a story that intrigues me. That takes serious skill. I must say I am impressed.
Wow. You wrote a fic that, judging by the summary, seemed to be based solely on bashing two characters that I rather like, and yet I still followed it. You took a concept I hated and turned it into a story that intrigues me. That takes serious skill. I must say I am impressed.
9/3/2014 c3 4steviesdianas
are will and jem going to be in this story and meet clary or? its good so far by the way!
4steviesdianasare will and jem going to be in this story and meet clary or? its good so far by the way!
9/3/2014 c3 Assassin-Cheshire
you kill simon :C tessa i understand but simon , update soon your let me in suspend
you kill simon :C tessa i understand but simon , update soon your let me in suspend
5/8/2014 c1 Assassin-Cheshire
what continues ? what continues? this is amazing direct to my favorites
what continues ? what continues? this is amazing direct to my favorites