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8/10/2014 c1 3ink2parchment
Don't get me wrong I love your story, so great but some comments on grammer, just in case you want to write another fic in English:
1 If you use 'are' you can't use 'It' because 'it' is singular, you would use 'there'. so instead of 'it are so many books!' it would be ' there are so many books'
2 Also if you are married you become mrs and if you are not married you are miss.
But amazing as English is not your first language!
5/9/2014 c1 2Badass.Dhampir.Shadowhunter
I think it is really funny!

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