for Indelible9/25/2024 c26 breakawaygirl
So, let me start by saying that I’m not sure how I missed this story when it first started, somebody just recommended it to me and I can’t believe I’m just reading it for the first time. However, I just wanted to tell you that I’m loving it so far, I love the interactions between Bella and Edward and the very realistic type feelings that you’ve represented with them. I decided to stop and review here because I absolutely love Masen, he is an outstanding original character and every parent’s dream for a teenager. Lol.
So, let me start by saying that I’m not sure how I missed this story when it first started, somebody just recommended it to me and I can’t believe I’m just reading it for the first time. However, I just wanted to tell you that I’m loving it so far, I love the interactions between Bella and Edward and the very realistic type feelings that you’ve represented with them. I decided to stop and review here because I absolutely love Masen, he is an outstanding original character and every parent’s dream for a teenager. Lol.
8/6/2024 c1 
6Payton79
I can't tell you how much I love this story. Your characters are so lovable and genuine. I'm really torn here. I hate that Edward and Bella lost those 20 years, which is half a lifetime in their case, and they can never get that time back. Then again, I love Masen and he wouldn't exist as the person he is if Edward had never been with Kate. However, at least they got the chance to have a baby together, which is a very meaningful experience and I'd have hated for Edward to only have shared that with another woman while Bella completely lost out on that, even though I was her own choice not to have children with Jake. In the end, everything turned out perfectly. Thank you so very much for this wonderful story.
6Payton79I can't tell you how much I love this story. Your characters are so lovable and genuine. I'm really torn here. I hate that Edward and Bella lost those 20 years, which is half a lifetime in their case, and they can never get that time back. Then again, I love Masen and he wouldn't exist as the person he is if Edward had never been with Kate. However, at least they got the chance to have a baby together, which is a very meaningful experience and I'd have hated for Edward to only have shared that with another woman while Bella completely lost out on that, even though I was her own choice not to have children with Jake. In the end, everything turned out perfectly. Thank you so very much for this wonderful story.
8/1/2024 c50 LadySnowdon
What a wonderful fic, I couldn't put this down all this week (along with your other fics)! I'm fairly new to the Twilight fandom although I did read the book before the first film came out. Its great to discover all this stuff, and get recommended fics and writers, such as your work, through Facebook groups. You're such a great writer - I've discovered so many great writers through fanfic, but I think maturity and life experience can make the stories even better (I hope that doesn't sound patronising, I'm a couple of years younger than Esme is in FFSG&SG and sometimes think I'm the only person my age who reads fanfic!). I felt so sad initially about the situation Edward and Bella were in, all those years lost, but then it turned into such a beautiful and heart-warming romance. Edward was so lovely in this, its nice to see a more mature Edward (Olderward?) although Edward has always been pretty mature anyway. And I loved Masen! It was like getting two Edwards for the price of one. The mix of POVs was fascinating. I was so glad Bella made peace with Carlisle, but I don't know if I could have done that so easily if it was me. Anyway, I don't know if you'll read this as I noticed you'd stopped writing, but I wanted to say thank you so much. Your stories ('books' perhaps more appropriate but I really love a good long fic to get my teeth into) are very much appreciated and are bringing me so much reading pleasure at the moment.
What a wonderful fic, I couldn't put this down all this week (along with your other fics)! I'm fairly new to the Twilight fandom although I did read the book before the first film came out. Its great to discover all this stuff, and get recommended fics and writers, such as your work, through Facebook groups. You're such a great writer - I've discovered so many great writers through fanfic, but I think maturity and life experience can make the stories even better (I hope that doesn't sound patronising, I'm a couple of years younger than Esme is in FFSG&SG and sometimes think I'm the only person my age who reads fanfic!). I felt so sad initially about the situation Edward and Bella were in, all those years lost, but then it turned into such a beautiful and heart-warming romance. Edward was so lovely in this, its nice to see a more mature Edward (Olderward?) although Edward has always been pretty mature anyway. And I loved Masen! It was like getting two Edwards for the price of one. The mix of POVs was fascinating. I was so glad Bella made peace with Carlisle, but I don't know if I could have done that so easily if it was me. Anyway, I don't know if you'll read this as I noticed you'd stopped writing, but I wanted to say thank you so much. Your stories ('books' perhaps more appropriate but I really love a good long fic to get my teeth into) are very much appreciated and are bringing me so much reading pleasure at the moment.
7/11/2024 c46 falschgeld
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5/25/2024 c22 Kimblue
After all these years,this is still one of my all time favorite Twilight fan fictions. You have a gift. Thank you.
After all these years,this is still one of my all time favorite Twilight fan fictions. You have a gift. Thank you.
5/14/2024 c22 12Eternally Addicted
So many feelings still there just sitting under the surface waiting to burst out. Loved it.
12Eternally AddictedSo many feelings still there just sitting under the surface waiting to burst out. Loved it.
5/11/2024 c19 Eternally Addicted
OOOPS! I wonder what secrets Masen let slip! Loving this story so much.
OOOPS! I wonder what secrets Masen let slip! Loving this story so much.
4/28/2024 c50 3Evelyne-raconte
Oh gosh I love it, this fiction is PERFECT !
Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
It's an amazing second chance story.
3Evelyne-raconteOh gosh I love it, this fiction is PERFECT !
Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
It's an amazing second chance story.
4/27/2024 c1 Guest
Oh more then 20 years …I hate when they are separate this long
Oh more then 20 years …I hate when they are separate this long
4/24/2024 c6 12Eternally Addicted
Hmmmm I am wondering if Edward is back in town for some reason and the boy is his son.
12Eternally AddictedHmmmm I am wondering if Edward is back in town for some reason and the boy is his son.
4/5/2024 c14 sue1zide
Why is she being such a Bitch?
Isn’t she a grown woman now? She sure is acting childish.
Why is she being such a Bitch?
Isn’t she a grown woman now? She sure is acting childish.