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6/12/2014 c8 5Fahad09
I'm having trouble reading this. Can you please fix it?
6/12/2014 c8 11chm01
ok… this really difficult to read, can you do something about it please?
6/11/2014 c7 Elsa the Queen of Snow
Interesting way to combine HP and ME, looking forward to more.
6/11/2014 c7 whrr.trudy
lol well that was fun :)
6/10/2014 c7 Sceonn
Harry's scene was ill executed...
6/8/2014 c7 1gaara king of the sand
sorry it took so long to read this i was kind of in the middle of two other story's but non-the-less great chapter hope you update again soon till next message bye
6/7/2014 c2 EffervescentNova
Wow, have you even read the Harry Potter books? Magic has limits, sever limits. As a point of fact the wizarding needed the muggle world for production of food and materials and offered little to nothing in return for what they took. The governements of the world knew of the magic world, it was merely the people that were kept ignorant of them.
6/7/2014 c1 EffervescentNova
If children born to a magical parent and a muggle only have a 5 percent chance of being magical, then the magical population would've died out long ago, for obvious reasons. Yet in this fic the wizarding population is 7 million, they would have to be fantastically inbred so much so their pregnancies shouldn't evenbe viable.

We also know from the movies that the chance is much higher than that, with families of mixed parentage having children with split abilities.
6/7/2014 c7 gaul1
good chapter, keep up the good work, byes
6/7/2014 c7 5Fahad09
While I understand that you wanted to show Harry as mortal and imperfect here, the way it was done was too forced. It felt like Harry was behaving as an overpowered version of his 17 year old self from the 7th book, rather than a 200 year old veteran Harry. Harry appeared far too sloppy and amateurish in this chapter.
6/7/2014 c7 Opinr
A good chapter I look forward to more.
6/7/2014 c7 4Tolreve Fodrol
Perfect blending of Harry Potter Universe with Mass Effect Universe. More!
6/7/2014 c6 Tolreve Fodrol
Epic!
6/6/2014 c7 Kaylen Cooper
Way awesome! :)
6/6/2014 c7 Blackholelord
So Harry made a appearance once again, its a nice chapter.
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