for Making Skin of Dragon7/27/2014 c5 Two months later
Anything in particular I'd like to see?
How about a new chapter? That'd be nice.
Anything in particular I'd like to see?
How about a new chapter? That'd be nice.
5/23/2014 c5 Scattycow
Oh well!
No doubt she's kept herself a sacrificial virgin to lay at the alter of St Edward.
Don't they always?
Oh well!
No doubt she's kept herself a sacrificial virgin to lay at the alter of St Edward.
Don't they always?
15/23/2014 c5 RowanBronze
Not so bad what happened between them. He chose to stop presueing her, which actually is very mature of him. Throughout reading this story, it seemed as if he had done something horrible to her. But in truth he didn't. The story built me up to expect some terrible heart break, but ended up falling sort. Which is fine, if this story has low angst. Just thought it was going to be something much more devastating. Thanks for sharing.
Not so bad what happened between them. He chose to stop presueing her, which actually is very mature of him. Throughout reading this story, it seemed as if he had done something horrible to her. But in truth he didn't. The story built me up to expect some terrible heart break, but ended up falling sort. Which is fine, if this story has low angst. Just thought it was going to be something much more devastating. Thanks for sharing.
5/14/2014 c4 Guest
um, she was 12 and he.. what? 15? that's kinda nasty, and simply not ok. he was a teenager already. she just a little girl. him kissing her is all kinds of wrong. i'm not even sure if it is legal to kiss her at that age. ewww.
um, she was 12 and he.. what? 15? that's kinda nasty, and simply not ok. he was a teenager already. she just a little girl. him kissing her is all kinds of wrong. i'm not even sure if it is legal to kiss her at that age. ewww.
5/16/2014 c4 ashiana
So that gives us a little bit of insight in to their history..
Loved the update, can't wait for more.
So that gives us a little bit of insight in to their history..
Loved the update, can't wait for more.
5/13/2014 c3 Guest
Sometimes words get confusing or misinterpret- like when Alice said He brought a girl on the first chapter, then Edward ignoring Bella at dinner but then chapter three- he suddenly got conscience or felt guilty and tried to explain about the Lauren that she was not invited. So what exactly does Edward wants? and why Alice said the he brought a girl if she came uninvited? And he ignored Bella all that time when Lauren was there? I f I were Bella I will ignore him and let him suffer a bit...
Sometimes words get confusing or misinterpret- like when Alice said He brought a girl on the first chapter, then Edward ignoring Bella at dinner but then chapter three- he suddenly got conscience or felt guilty and tried to explain about the Lauren that she was not invited. So what exactly does Edward wants? and why Alice said the he brought a girl if she came uninvited? And he ignored Bella all that time when Lauren was there? I f I were Bella I will ignore him and let him suffer a bit...
5/12/2014 c3 Guest
Loved it!
Loved it!
5/12/2014 c3 tuti
Interesting, update soon xx
Interesting, update soon xx