for Jack Night-Dark Jack one-shot2/25/2015 c1 KMB
Why is this just a one-shot? This could be a really good alternative ending to the movie!
Why is this just a one-shot? This could be a really good alternative ending to the movie!
7/28/2014 c1 
15RogueMudblood
This would be an excellent opening for a much longer story. You do have a couple of typos (estatic should be ecstatic, screems should be screams) but I think this would make an excellently dark story. Does the story occur some time after the movie? Or is this an alternate reality from the scene of Pitch's proposal to Jack in the movie?
If you ever choose to expand this, it could prove to be interesting.
15RogueMudbloodThis would be an excellent opening for a much longer story. You do have a couple of typos (estatic should be ecstatic, screems should be screams) but I think this would make an excellently dark story. Does the story occur some time after the movie? Or is this an alternate reality from the scene of Pitch's proposal to Jack in the movie?
If you ever choose to expand this, it could prove to be interesting.