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12/7/2014 c1 7uselessfork
I actually really liked this. Sure, it was quite disturbing, but the fact that you managed to give me chills is proof of good writing. You write very well, and I like the style and structure of your sentences; very fluid.
I won't say 'Sakura wouldn't do that' because I'm pretty sure that's an obvious statement, and I don't think the purpose of this piece was to provide a realistic portrayal of the characters so much as to examine a darker version of events. All in all, I enjoyed reading it. Keep writing, you definitely have talent.
10/25/2014 c1 3Ferm
meh.. i am not a sasudaku fan so i most likely wouldnt read your other stories..
ah well.. this one shot was good even if sakura sounded more like a whiny brat.. but the facts were true.. i too didnt like the blatant favouritism kakashi showed..But he didnt teach naruto too.. and sakura in part one was more interested in sasuke than anything..
5/12/2014 c1 Guest
This started out pretty good and then went into wtf mode. A little disturbing.

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