for Dreams Do Come True5/29/2014 c19 ChiaraRobbins
I really love the long journey of Regina making peace with her past and the evil with the help of true love! love all the scene with Snow, they're refreshing and it's good to remember there's always hope no matter how strained relationships are.
Aaaand your Emma being less idiotic than usual is good too! keep it going, i like it :)
I really love the long journey of Regina making peace with her past and the evil with the help of true love! love all the scene with Snow, they're refreshing and it's good to remember there's always hope no matter how strained relationships are.
Aaaand your Emma being less idiotic than usual is good too! keep it going, i like it :)
5/24/2014 c14 Guest
Oh now I wish there was as scene with Regina and granny :)
Oh now I wish there was as scene with Regina and granny :)
5/22/2014 c12 
15jquackers
Omg I wasn't expecting that LOL. But of course Regina would get into a car crash this time and they would propose in a hospital room in their infamous hospital gowns LOL. But honestly, I thought this chapter was a little lacking. Although I didn't see this coming, some things were a bit... predictable and overused. The whole Emma-and-Regina-doing/thinking-the-same-thing-at-the-same-time thing is cute but, like I said, overused, almost to the point of boring. It's cool seeing both their perspectives, but it'll be nice to have something different and new. They are, after all, two separate people who in reality are quite different, especially personality-wise. It'll be good if you start portraying their individual characters better rather than writing them as a single synchronized unit with little to no uniqueness. That's just my opinion though! Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter!
15jquackersOmg I wasn't expecting that LOL. But of course Regina would get into a car crash this time and they would propose in a hospital room in their infamous hospital gowns LOL. But honestly, I thought this chapter was a little lacking. Although I didn't see this coming, some things were a bit... predictable and overused. The whole Emma-and-Regina-doing/thinking-the-same-thing-at-the-same-time thing is cute but, like I said, overused, almost to the point of boring. It's cool seeing both their perspectives, but it'll be nice to have something different and new. They are, after all, two separate people who in reality are quite different, especially personality-wise. It'll be good if you start portraying their individual characters better rather than writing them as a single synchronized unit with little to no uniqueness. That's just my opinion though! Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter!
5/22/2014 c11 jquackers
LOOL omg I love seeing the perspectives of other townspeople on Emma and Regina's relationship. While I think it's a little creepy that Jefferson and Grace spy on people with telescopes, it's cute that they do it together as a bonding activity. I love how everyone's initially shocked at Emma and Regina's relationship LOL and all the odd situations they find them in HAHAH
LOOL omg I love seeing the perspectives of other townspeople on Emma and Regina's relationship. While I think it's a little creepy that Jefferson and Grace spy on people with telescopes, it's cute that they do it together as a bonding activity. I love how everyone's initially shocked at Emma and Regina's relationship LOL and all the odd situations they find them in HAHAH
5/21/2014 c6 jquackers
HAHAHAH oh my god this chapter is priceless. I love everything about the diner scene, especially Emma backpedaling and running away the moment she saw Regina LOL. And then squatting in an alley talking to a rat LOOL and unknowingly being caught by Regina. Priceless. Great job with this one! Super excited to see what'll happen now that they've finally confessed!
HAHAHAH oh my god this chapter is priceless. I love everything about the diner scene, especially Emma backpedaling and running away the moment she saw Regina LOL. And then squatting in an alley talking to a rat LOOL and unknowingly being caught by Regina. Priceless. Great job with this one! Super excited to see what'll happen now that they've finally confessed!
5/21/2014 c2 jquackers
LOOL I love Granny as the outside observer. I kinda hope she keeps this role because I can imagine it leading to amusing places. Great job so far!
LOOL I love Granny as the outside observer. I kinda hope she keeps this role because I can imagine it leading to amusing places. Great job so far!
5/17/2014 c10 themoreuthanos
Them always passing each other in their cars was insanely funny. I couldn't stop laughing the final time they did it which resulted in that accident. And their first date, so sweet. They're quite adorable together aren't they
Them always passing each other in their cars was insanely funny. I couldn't stop laughing the final time they did it which resulted in that accident. And their first date, so sweet. They're quite adorable together aren't they
5/16/2014 c8 Andrea316
They are soo cute together, and I really dislike Snow attitude ( in the show too).
Have you seen 3x22?
Pd: English is not my first language so I'm sorry if I have make some mistake spelling, and my review are short.
They are soo cute together, and I really dislike Snow attitude ( in the show too).
Have you seen 3x22?
Pd: English is not my first language so I'm sorry if I have make some mistake spelling, and my review are short.
5/14/2014 c5 LOCISVU
So those two doesn't even realize that they're chasing one another without realizing it?!
So those two doesn't even realize that they're chasing one another without realizing it?!
5/14/2014 c5 Andrea316
If they continue like that the whole town will Kwon before they realize XD jajaja
Pd: English is not my first language so I'm sorry if I have make some mistake spelling, and my review are short.
If they continue like that the whole town will Kwon before they realize XD jajaja
Pd: English is not my first language so I'm sorry if I have make some mistake spelling, and my review are short.