
7/26/2018 c1
20sxkurajima
Oh yes, i'm bored with the typical playboy natsu so playgirl lucy is a fresh read for me. Thanks for writing this

Oh yes, i'm bored with the typical playboy natsu so playgirl lucy is a fresh read for me. Thanks for writing this
11/2/2014 c1
34lucyglitter11
Woohooo I'm finally here to review your stuff :-D (I've got so much to review I'm scared x-D)
Hahha omg Natsu you just see one girl in the bar and you think she's your true love? Puh-leeze x-D
My. God did Natsu just marofy a pick up line :-P I love how the conversations go smoothly! (I love conversations alot :-D)
Omg Lucy would seriously look so pretty with hair till the waist and sliver hoop earrings! I have always said that you should totally be the hair and costume designer for all FT characters you'll do brilliant! X-D
Maaan Natsu don't be a fool, Lucy cant be that dumb :-P
I really really loved that line "You have excellent taste in girls. Like me" oh so badass
Your descriptions are as usual So. Good. I really need those description lesson yet you know! I mean I can always imagine it all so well!
GRAMMAR SHOT DOWN NATSU TODAY! X-DDDD
Natsu staph acting smart and get grammar lessons :-P I loved the way you turned Natsu's questions seriously. And then he tried to change the question and he was shot down AGAIN. woah
Natsu just got tricked. brilliant
He just lost all chances with the super-awesome Lucy Heartfilia, poor thing.
You have no idea but you wrote a really cool story! Even I liked the idea of Lucy being a sexy player girl :3 I really liked your intro tho "Too bad, Natsu met his match."
Keep getting random ideas like this please X-D

Woohooo I'm finally here to review your stuff :-D (I've got so much to review I'm scared x-D)
Hahha omg Natsu you just see one girl in the bar and you think she's your true love? Puh-leeze x-D
My. God did Natsu just marofy a pick up line :-P I love how the conversations go smoothly! (I love conversations alot :-D)
Omg Lucy would seriously look so pretty with hair till the waist and sliver hoop earrings! I have always said that you should totally be the hair and costume designer for all FT characters you'll do brilliant! X-D
Maaan Natsu don't be a fool, Lucy cant be that dumb :-P
I really really loved that line "You have excellent taste in girls. Like me" oh so badass
Your descriptions are as usual So. Good. I really need those description lesson yet you know! I mean I can always imagine it all so well!
GRAMMAR SHOT DOWN NATSU TODAY! X-DDDD
Natsu staph acting smart and get grammar lessons :-P I loved the way you turned Natsu's questions seriously. And then he tried to change the question and he was shot down AGAIN. woah
Natsu just got tricked. brilliant
He just lost all chances with the super-awesome Lucy Heartfilia, poor thing.
You have no idea but you wrote a really cool story! Even I liked the idea of Lucy being a sexy player girl :3 I really liked your intro tho "Too bad, Natsu met his match."
Keep getting random ideas like this please X-D
6/12/2014 c1
2BeastToBe
man i like this story i wouldve never thought of lucy that way but seeing her like that is verry ... amusing

man i like this story i wouldve never thought of lucy that way but seeing her like that is verry ... amusing
5/16/2014 c1 Beautifully Natural
This made A LOT OF SENSE. Super awesome! It was keen, on-point, and BEAST. I loved reading this! Your AMAZING. I also love the last few lines:
"She knew how to play all right.
Sexy. Diabolical.
And she wouldn't change."
I LOVE IT, IT WAS SO AWESOME TO READ! SPLENDID IDEA, AUTHOR! :D YOUR PHENOMENAL.
This made A LOT OF SENSE. Super awesome! It was keen, on-point, and BEAST. I loved reading this! Your AMAZING. I also love the last few lines:
"She knew how to play all right.
Sexy. Diabolical.
And she wouldn't change."
I LOVE IT, IT WAS SO AWESOME TO READ! SPLENDID IDEA, AUTHOR! :D YOUR PHENOMENAL.
5/11/2014 c1 unknown
I like it
I like it