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12/7/2014 c1 7uselessfork
Again, this piece is sad and a little heartbreaking, but very well written. I love SakuHina as a pairing as well. I would honestly love to read something a little longer? Are you thinking of working on any multichap stories?
10/24/2014 c1 4songofhopeandhonor
oh gosh, this is short and sweet and sad. the imagery was very evocative, i especially enjoyed the line "and just right to tangle fingers in, until she tangles kunai in their ribs." like, damn, that was poetic and fierce and wow.

loving the hints at sakuhina, too! i've been on a sakura/hinata kick lately, so this was very pleasant to stumble across indeed.

"they wanted him back, and he wanted broken bonds." so much ouch. great job, you're very talented )
5/26/2014 c1 23wingedmercury
I liked your vignettes for each member of team 7. You've got a nice style of writing:)

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