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5/11/2014 c1 Guest
You should have Arturia Pendragon as one of his knights.
5/11/2014 c1 Durandel
Good job-and cool your that the Son of a the Fallen story will someday be conined.
5/11/2014 c1 Guest
Naruto's devil hideout/club in Kuoh Academy should be the Ramen Appreciation Club.
5/11/2014 c1 Reviewer
The peerage is your choice of course but i'd say some males will balance it out well and better the story.
For example:
- Sasuke with the Kusanagi no tsurugi as a knight (either make him a human with an ocular sacred gear or a devil with family bloodline similar to the Sharingan). You could include a similar revenge story or give him a paring among the peerage members. Things like this can expand the story well in my opinion.

I just hope the harem is not stupidly large.
5/11/2014 c1 1Hakuryukou79
Interesting prologue and I like the interaction between Kushina and Grayfia despite the two being opposite of each other in personality. For Naruto's peerage, I say it should be the normal route and make it compose both of male and female members. Also can you include descendants of legendary heroes in Naruto's Peerage?

Good luck and I look forward to more of this story.
5/11/2014 c1 darki26
Looking forward to future chapters
5/11/2014 c1 1ddcj1990
Sweet good first chapter
5/11/2014 c1 Naruto Kuran
interesting prologue and may change rias on sona sitri.
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