
1/25/2015 c9
70YellowAngela
Glad to see you back and finishing your story. It's still kinda confusing what had happened. How did Holiday get the deactivated nanites? What happened to Caesar? But please continue.

Glad to see you back and finishing your story. It's still kinda confusing what had happened. How did Holiday get the deactivated nanites? What happened to Caesar? But please continue.
8/28/2014 c8 YellowAngela
I think your ideas for the story is good but you switch POV's in the middle of the story. There are also some minor spelling errors.
I think your ideas for the story is good but you switch POV's in the middle of the story. There are also some minor spelling errors.
8/27/2014 c8
3alexina23
Ok not my best but I've been having difficulties posting and it deleted some of my sentences. Review what you think, please?

Ok not my best but I've been having difficulties posting and it deleted some of my sentences. Review what you think, please?
6/4/2014 c2
1fanaticagenrex
Me gusto, aunque la actitud de Rex fue algo... repentina y sin mucho sentido, digamos.

Me gusto, aunque la actitud de Rex fue algo... repentina y sin mucho sentido, digamos.
5/31/2014 c4
1MyNameOnAGravestone
Please! Let nothing happen to Six! Let it happen to Rex instead! For,ya know, entertainment.

Please! Let nothing happen to Six! Let it happen to Rex instead! For,ya know, entertainment.