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1/10/2015 c28 25CloudSkylark18
Oh my gosh things just got serious. I can't wait for more.
1/5/2015 c34 Luckywhisker
Dude, I've been waiting so long of this chapter! You were beginning to scare me a bit with the gore warning at the start, but, hey, it wasn't as bad as you made it seem. Nice story! Nice chapter! Write again soon!
1/5/2015 c34 5Coolstar422
Yeaahh! Woooo! Another chapter up! Good job. *starts whispering* you did wonderful... *perks up again* Oh my god, I love it even more now! Wooooo! *Mouth starts foaming, stops and whispers the foam away looking disgusted with herself* sorry you had to see that. Anyways I'm gonna stop rambling.
ciao
1/4/2015 c34 boredommaster
Dont worry about the t rating it good unless there is a lemon or youare talking about murdering stuff incold blood and how it is freaking awesome. Avoid that and your fine. Like the chapter as well great job.
11/25/2014 c15 3OseanSoldier
Kind of had to laugh at you author's notes at the end. Almost all of my chapters are longer than 4k words with the longest being around 14k. Of course, there are people who think 14k is short.

I have been enjoying your story. It certainly is interesting. It was enjoyable to see that you have a white Lucario. Don't know too many stories outside my own that use that.
11/18/2014 c33 Luckywhisker
It had to be the poor Vaporeon. It just had to be.
11/11/2014 c31 SirisTheKitsune
Yowch! dat snake-bite doh!
11/9/2014 c27 25CloudSkylark18
this is pretty good. I think you forgot to add a 'the' before way. But other than that I think your good.
11/7/2014 c30 boredommaster
Damn I don't think I could do better
11/7/2014 c29 5Coolstar422
Whoa... heavy... but it's great! Heh your dishing out story's everyday!
11/6/2014 c28 boredommaster
geuss what Thu says
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Shoryuken!
Shoryuken!
Shoryuken!
Shoryuken!
Shoryuken!
As he beats the living shit out of his enemies :-)
11/6/2014 c29 Luckywhisker
Okay, things are getting extremely interesting...

1) Thank you for introducing (what I assume will be) the main antagonist. I feel that the story now has a very concrete sense of direction. This is gonna get good!

2) Alice is interesting. I don't think Ryu and his gang met her purely out of coincidence. Hmm...

3) The Shadowstorm virus is also enthralling. Jeez, this is an amazing storyline so far!

Keep writing, and upload soon! I need more!
11/5/2014 c28 Coolstar422
Whoa! What time is it? Major conflict time! Yeah, your so awesome, and you know it! xD Keep em coming
11/5/2014 c10 boredommaster
shoryuken
-ryu
11/5/2014 c9 boredommaster
shoooooryuken
ryu
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