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5/24/2014 c1 3The Hapless Quill
This piece was haunting. Beautifully written, but it sent chills up my spine.

I loved the extended metaphor for Alice's insanity - the blackness, consuming her, the concept that she can't speak or remember anything. It also puts into perspective how people suffering from insanity may feel, as though they are trapped in a body that is still functioning but isn't really alive.

Another thing that I really liked was the concept of the Healer's feeding her potions, and they remove the little sense of reality that she has managed to grasp - it really puts into perspective how out of control she may feel in her own body.

I think this is one of the most inspiring and intriguing pieces I have ever read of yours, it was just superb. Great job!
5/14/2014 c1 27Hermione Is My Role Model
Oh wow :'(
This was amazing!
5/14/2014 c1 60AngelofDarkness1605
Beautiful work, as always. Sad too - girl, that last line!
5/14/2014 c1 178Susan M. M
Good description.

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