for If Only We Can Turn Back Time7/10/2014 c4 Guest
Um...the towel raped Tris?!
Um...the towel raped Tris?!
5/18/2014 c3 Guest
I love it! but please stop using run-on sentences. Overall, amazing story!
I love it! but please stop using run-on sentences. Overall, amazing story!
5/18/2014 c2 Guest
What I noticed at the end in Tobias' POV, he didn't actually color/dye his hair, it was just naturally dark brown/black. But anyways, can't wait for the next update! :D
What I noticed at the end in Tobias' POV, he didn't actually color/dye his hair, it was just naturally dark brown/black. But anyways, can't wait for the next update! :D
5/18/2014 c3 Sakura Crystals
This is a nice move along chapter. It also gave a very nice view point of Tobias pov.
This is a nice move along chapter. It also gave a very nice view point of Tobias pov.
5/18/2014 c3 
6Alessandra.12
Don't worry for the short chapter, i enjoyed it!
But I hope they were longer in the future haha
Please update!
6Alessandra.12Don't worry for the short chapter, i enjoyed it!
But I hope they were longer in the future haha
Please update!