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5/15/2014 c1 YoursTruly
This felt somewhat unfinished...I think it's more than likely because the pieces of Hashirama's memories you potray don't suit so well the present moment. I would have wished little bit more in this. But the ending where Madara made his statement was quite good.
Also, I suggest you to look this through and fix several spelling errors and such you've in this. Those kind of started bother me lot of in the end...

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