5/27/2015 c2 1bhull242
Normally, I don't like this kind of AU, which is completely different from the original works, other than basic personality traits and names, but I really like the emotional appeal of this one. Looking forward to the next one!

5/5/2015 c2 6Fuyukazehime
Ok so here it is... Trying not to be hard though!

First off, this is very well written. There are inconsistencies in your spelling of Masaki. You mistype Misaki many times. Compelling story so far with interesting back stories.

Now for the bad part... this is barely a Ranma fic.

/rant You take Ranma's female side, turn her into her own person which is fine in itself... Then you take the Ranma story and press DELETE for the most part. You took the 90s setting and moved it up 30 years or so which again is fine in itself. You mash up tons of crossover characters with their back stories deleted and remade. Everything has been hollowed out and rewritten. The only things this has in common with Ranma 1/2 or any of the other fics you took characters from is the names, locations and character appearances. /rant

THIS SAID... I will continue to read this as it is a compelling story... I just find it to not be a true fanfic! RAWR!

10/12/2014 c1 2clockright
You have caught my interest with this. The way that you put the story it seems to be that they know one another. A classified project code named 'Arch Angel.' Sounds to be really fun. The part that I like the most is that Washu had been waiting thirty five years for Ranko Saotome. Thank you for writing this. Please, update when you can!

5/17/2014 c1 Janissa
Interesting beginning, this is sort of like a teasing glimpse into a great story which I am looking forward to reading.

Janissa

5/16/2014 c1 firelordeg
good start thank you for sharing