for The Jewel of the Varia7/14/2017 c14 LyriaHart
this story was a bit sad but it was still sweet. Though j wish the story would have been longer. Please write more Hibari fanfiction. No pressure!
this story was a bit sad but it was still sweet. Though j wish the story would have been longer. Please write more Hibari fanfiction. No pressure!
2/1/2016 c14 
5LovelyAngelYuuki
Aaaaawww. So cuuute. A bit quick but not so much that it made the plot confusing. But I loved the idea of Bel's sister and his love for her.
5LovelyAngelYuukiAaaaawww. So cuuute. A bit quick but not so much that it made the plot confusing. But I loved the idea of Bel's sister and his love for her.
4/26/2015 c14 4CrescentMoonXIII
I loved this story. It was really good, but it seemed a little rushed. I don't know what other is, but the beginning was really confusing up until when Tamako had to explain her past to Hibari. And in the end, it was really abrupt how it ended just there. I mean, at least you could have them kiss...right? Hope this criticism won't offend you.
4CrescentMoonXIIII loved this story. It was really good, but it seemed a little rushed. I don't know what other is, but the beginning was really confusing up until when Tamako had to explain her past to Hibari. And in the end, it was really abrupt how it ended just there. I mean, at least you could have them kiss...right? Hope this criticism won't offend you.
12/26/2014 c5 cincinnatus18
What, so someone can't beat Hibari without being accused of belonging to a mafia family?
What, so someone can't beat Hibari without being accused of belonging to a mafia family?
10/9/2014 c14 Guest
It sounds like he has a sister complex. 'My darling sister'... 'The jewel of my life'...his future wife would be jealous of her...
It sounds like he has a sister complex. 'My darling sister'... 'The jewel of my life'...his future wife would be jealous of her...
10/9/2014 c13 Guest
That was a very quick five minutes.
That was a very quick five minutes.
10/9/2014 c5 Guest
Tamako has never mentioned her last name. Nd no one's suspicious? Then again, this IS Namimori, the town that didn't realize there were a bunch of ASSASSINS... And can't she just say that she learnt aikido and a bunch of other martial arts to beat Hibari?
Tamako has never mentioned her last name. Nd no one's suspicious? Then again, this IS Namimori, the town that didn't realize there were a bunch of ASSASSINS... And can't she just say that she learnt aikido and a bunch of other martial arts to beat Hibari?
5/25/2014 c14 Allen94
I LOVED IT! :D I like how you put it. I wasn't should how to word what i was thinking but you did it perfectly, awesome job :)
I LOVED IT! :D I like how you put it. I wasn't should how to word what i was thinking but you did it perfectly, awesome job :)
5/24/2014 c12 Allen94
WHAT YOU ONLY HAVE ONE REVIEW WHAT THE HELL! :( okay 1) your story is AMAZING 2) I was reading it and so caught up in it that when my phone rang I had a heart attack and cussed out the person calling ( not the best idea seeing as it was my mom :\ anyway) this story is awesome please update soon :D
WHAT YOU ONLY HAVE ONE REVIEW WHAT THE HELL! :( okay 1) your story is AMAZING 2) I was reading it and so caught up in it that when my phone rang I had a heart attack and cussed out the person calling ( not the best idea seeing as it was my mom :\ anyway) this story is awesome please update soon :D