for The Immortal Son of the Earth8/31/2024 c1 MyOpinion
I know this is old but w-w-w-w-wouldn’t it make more sense for Naruto to be more mature then he is? Also wouldn’t it make more sense if idk Gaea would meet with Naruto and tell him truths about the gods? Family sugar coats important stuff and I feel he would actually have a reason to go father his “dad” istead of whatever you were trying to do, but what do I know
I know this is old but w-w-w-w-wouldn’t it make more sense for Naruto to be more mature then he is? Also wouldn’t it make more sense if idk Gaea would meet with Naruto and tell him truths about the gods? Family sugar coats important stuff and I feel he would actually have a reason to go father his “dad” istead of whatever you were trying to do, but what do I know
17/21/2023 c4 Blue31
This is a great story so far. I hope you continue the story.
This is a great story so far. I hope you continue the story.
5/22/2023 c6 Guest
nooooooo moooooooooooooooore
nooooooo moooooooooooooooore
3/13/2023 c6 JaunetheRNJR
Hey just giving a review for this story as I really like it. This seems like a darker version of a young god. There is a lot of setup for some juicy conflict and focus on the mortal side of the world. I don't know what your plans for Gaia are yet though. From what I have gathered it is likely a twisted love. She loves Naruto but can't get over her need for vengeance. This will likely push him to side more with the Olympians. He may in the end replace Gaia as the new Earth Primordial. Anyways I hope to this story continue at some point.
Hey just giving a review for this story as I really like it. This seems like a darker version of a young god. There is a lot of setup for some juicy conflict and focus on the mortal side of the world. I don't know what your plans for Gaia are yet though. From what I have gathered it is likely a twisted love. She loves Naruto but can't get over her need for vengeance. This will likely push him to side more with the Olympians. He may in the end replace Gaia as the new Earth Primordial. Anyways I hope to this story continue at some point.
7/5/2022 c5 Brother V
Stop fucking capping even if he was his lion and dragon could've sorted them out
Stop fucking capping even if he was his lion and dragon could've sorted them out