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8/19/2015 c7 Abymoosh911
Wow. I really love that end story. It is very creative but an actual non-fiction story. Because Sakurai took in the Kid Icarus series, and he also was also the developer of tha Kirby series. Witch makes Pit adopted. I know it makes perfect scents but I am still confused. For some strange reason.
10/16/2014 c7 Guest
Yay I knew it! So this is before just a clone? Never knew.
10/16/2014 c5 tes-x the dawg
I think the girl was Samus because a beast (I think the beast was Ridley) attacked and the mom sacrificed herself and in just a clone samus was pits sister.
Great story so far! This and just a clone were great. :)
6/1/2014 c7 alcamoth
Awesome ending! I loved it!
5/31/2014 c6 alcamoth
Second-to-last chapter already? Wow!
I love Pit's backstory and I think I know who his sister is...
5/31/2014 c5 2Archer-of-Despair
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5/29/2014 c5 alcamoth
Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder, eh?
Fun fact- Crystal has a light case of that.
Great chapter!
5/27/2014 c4 alcamoth
Ssh... They're not supposed to know what's under the mask!
Congrats on your 50th chapter!
5/24/2014 c3 alcamoth
Awesome chapter! Where'd my other review go? Huh.
To that Guest Review, why EXACTLY did you call yourself "stop existing"? -.-
Anyways, can't wait for the next one!
5/23/2014 c2 filllterkeys
"Fortunately I don't have a life," haha. Who dreams of that anyways? Hm, the start is as usual the part I don't like and I spend a time chopping off my limbs to gt the plot twist out more quickly
5/20/2014 c1 stop existing
why and how da fudge are dedede, kirby ,meta,and pit they brothers? That makes zero sense.
5/18/2014 c1 alcamoth
NUUU JIGGLYPUFF!
Heh, sorry bout that. She and I have a bad history.
And Crazy Hand has a head? Huh. Well I guess he is kinda crazy like that!
Great start! Gonna favorite this already! :D

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