for Facebook6/24/2023 c1 Guest
haha my favorite charcter is joe hardy and my favorite movie is rise of the gaurdians and my favorite character is jackfrost! :P
haha my favorite charcter is joe hardy and my favorite movie is rise of the gaurdians and my favorite character is jackfrost! :P
3/1/2023 c3 Guest
Ha Ha! that was fun to read!
Ha Ha! that was fun to read!
54/9/2017 c3 kayleigh
You are halerious
You are halerious
4/9/2017 c1 kayleigh
Ha ha ha ha lol my mom is like fav part was when joe stabed frank with a pencil
Ha ha ha ha lol my mom is like fav part was when joe stabed frank with a pencil
6/27/2014 c2 Guest
It's awesome, please do more chapters
It's awesome, please do more chapters
6/12/2014 c2 Sometimes Brilliant
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Please note that stories written in chat/script format are not allowed on this site, as per line 6 of the rules. Please move this story to a website that allows such content (such as Livejournal, a personal blog, Wattpad, etc). Or you can simply edit the story to contain dialogue tags and quotation marks so that it is in a more traditional format.
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Entries not allowed:
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2. One or two liners.
3. MST: comments inserted in between the flow of a copied story.
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6/11/2014 c2 Guest
The first chapter was better than this one. If you're going to add characters who aren't deeply embedded in canon, like Tony, Biff, Iola, Vanessa, and Phil, it'd help to have some character development. How do they know Vijay? Is he in Bayport, or did they meet him on a case? Even in canon, they give a short description in every book. Including what characters look like. I think it's great that you're writing, though, keep at it.
The first chapter was better than this one. If you're going to add characters who aren't deeply embedded in canon, like Tony, Biff, Iola, Vanessa, and Phil, it'd help to have some character development. How do they know Vijay? Is he in Bayport, or did they meet him on a case? Even in canon, they give a short description in every book. Including what characters look like. I think it's great that you're writing, though, keep at it.
6/10/2014 c1 Guest
This is not a story. It is dribble. Try and write a real story!
This is not a story. It is dribble. Try and write a real story!
6/4/2014 c1 Scribbler123
Awwww, that was AWESOME!
I loved how you had everyone be different people from other things, that was super cool- and I had fun trying to guess who everyone was before I kept reading. Great job!
:)
Awwww, that was AWESOME!
I loved how you had everyone be different people from other things, that was super cool- and I had fun trying to guess who everyone was before I kept reading. Great job!
:)