for Sins of the Father8/23/2014 c1 
9CaptureGod-Otamegane
HA he called her big momma! As for the pairing, Naomi is super beautiful but I love Olga. But I always say it's not like the first girl Naruto is with has to be his forever soul mate.
9CaptureGod-OtameganeHA he called her big momma! As for the pairing, Naomi is super beautiful but I love Olga. But I always say it's not like the first girl Naruto is with has to be his forever soul mate.
6/29/2014 c1 Guest
Dude i saw your Review in Dragon ball Shinobi.
Areyou going to post a new chapted or wha. Give us something
Dude i saw your Review in Dragon ball Shinobi.
Areyou going to post a new chapted or wha. Give us something
6/2/2014 c1 Aidan Kennedy
Update Fate Stay Shinobi Dreams please! It's been months since we seen one!
Update Fate Stay Shinobi Dreams please! It's been months since we seen one!
5/31/2014 c1 Guest
EVA is the Worse Mother Ever. Lol. How would things change if she took time to be a mother to The Twins.
EVA is the Worse Mother Ever. Lol. How would things change if she took time to be a mother to The Twins.
5/31/2014 c1 Guest
Naruto x Emma? Lol.
Naruto x Olga?
Emma Could be Naruto's Sidekick, Just like Ocracon is Snake's Sidekick.
Emma become' Sunny Mentor/
Naruto x Emma? Lol.
Naruto x Olga?
Emma Could be Naruto's Sidekick, Just like Ocracon is Snake's Sidekick.
Emma become' Sunny Mentor/
5/31/2014 c1 11chm01
ok, I know you said the paring was undecided, but how about a member of the beauty and the beast unit? I would say Meryl, but I like the fact that she ended up with Johnny , anyways this is great.
11chm01ok, I know you said the paring was undecided, but how about a member of the beauty and the beast unit? I would say Meryl, but I like the fact that she ended up with Johnny , anyways this is great.
5/22/2014 c1 Slazamnewgiddy
To answer your question of the tempo change in the new Rising Revengeance-well it's in the name. All the Metal Gear games that had the stealth portions were Metal Gear SOLID. Think of it as a new ign. The SOLID franchises are the ones that included stealth. Such as Metal Gear Solid V, has stealth right? Rising Revengeance is supposed to have a different tempo, hence the different name. I hope that answers your question. Oh and good story, keep up the good work!
To answer your question of the tempo change in the new Rising Revengeance-well it's in the name. All the Metal Gear games that had the stealth portions were Metal Gear SOLID. Think of it as a new ign. The SOLID franchises are the ones that included stealth. Such as Metal Gear Solid V, has stealth right? Rising Revengeance is supposed to have a different tempo, hence the different name. I hope that answers your question. Oh and good story, keep up the good work!
5/20/2014 c1 Because
Revengance is a spinoff, not a solid gane, rising is its kwn series
Revengance is a spinoff, not a solid gane, rising is its kwn series
5/20/2014 c1 Mzr90
I'll be interested in seeing how things go. Unsure if this would have a pairing. Only people I think can fit is Naomi or Mei or Mai.
I'll be interested in seeing how things go. Unsure if this would have a pairing. Only people I think can fit is Naomi or Mei or Mai.