
11/3/2020 c21 witchyagender
it would totally be cool to see you continue this and rewrite it, it will old be nice to see how your writing has changed and evolved! also it's so great to see you back!
it would totally be cool to see you continue this and rewrite it, it will old be nice to see how your writing has changed and evolved! also it's so great to see you back!
11/3/2020 c20 Pointer3109
Huhmmm. Baby carnivore hatching. I couldn't need something for it could I? Like maybe food?
Funny.
Huhmmm. Baby carnivore hatching. I couldn't need something for it could I? Like maybe food?
Funny.
11/3/2020 c21 nlou
rewrite it if you want but I'm invested into this now emotionally so please keep it up
rewrite it if you want but I'm invested into this now emotionally so please keep it up
11/3/2020 c21 Jenn007
Please rewrite and continue. Your writing, even at the age of 14, was much cleaner and enjoyable than others who are much older than you. You showed much promise and if you had not posted about high school things, I would not guessed how young you were. In fact, the perspective of a young teenager writing about other young teenagers was perfect. Keep up the good work and don't completely throw all the old stuff out (your other writings). They may actually serve to give you inspiration for other stories and plots. As we said back in the 60s, "keep the faith, baby." [I'm not Jenn007. I am her mother reading over her shoulder, sort of.] I look forward to reading more of your work.
Please rewrite and continue. Your writing, even at the age of 14, was much cleaner and enjoyable than others who are much older than you. You showed much promise and if you had not posted about high school things, I would not guessed how young you were. In fact, the perspective of a young teenager writing about other young teenagers was perfect. Keep up the good work and don't completely throw all the old stuff out (your other writings). They may actually serve to give you inspiration for other stories and plots. As we said back in the 60s, "keep the faith, baby." [I'm not Jenn007. I am her mother reading over her shoulder, sort of.] I look forward to reading more of your work.
11/3/2020 c21 shadowisamirror
hi, sorry if i made a mess with my comment your story was one of the first i read, i hope you will write again soon but understand that it'll happen only if you enjoy it
hi, sorry if i made a mess with my comment your story was one of the first i read, i hope you will write again soon but understand that it'll happen only if you enjoy it
11/3/2020 c21
6ShadowedHearts
Absolutely still interested, and lemme tell you I do not comment often. This was a fun read, and I'm actually curious to see what time has done to your writing style!
...also, I feel you on the embarrassment of going back and reading your younger self's fics..

Absolutely still interested, and lemme tell you I do not comment often. This was a fun read, and I'm actually curious to see what time has done to your writing style!
...also, I feel you on the embarrassment of going back and reading your younger self's fics..
11/3/2020 c21
2Blosiom
Please don't delete the story. I only found this more recently, but I do enjoy the story, and it is a good idea. I'm in a similar situation as you. I started writing fanfiction as a child and then stopped. Now I am back into it and a much older and better writer then I was as a kid. I haven't yet touched my older stories, and I am not sure if I ever will. But this one is good the way it is. If you do re-write it, then I would love to see the new version.

Please don't delete the story. I only found this more recently, but I do enjoy the story, and it is a good idea. I'm in a similar situation as you. I started writing fanfiction as a child and then stopped. Now I am back into it and a much older and better writer then I was as a kid. I haven't yet touched my older stories, and I am not sure if I ever will. But this one is good the way it is. If you do re-write it, then I would love to see the new version.
11/3/2020 c1 Omega2217
Glad to hear your doing well and I would love to see a rewrite/continuation of this story. I thought it was well done and it was a story that I looked forward to reading
Glad to hear your doing well and I would love to see a rewrite/continuation of this story. I thought it was well done and it was a story that I looked forward to reading
11/3/2020 c21
25Tarsina18
Please consider rewriting it... I have been checking for you to update for a year or two...

Please consider rewriting it... I have been checking for you to update for a year or two...
11/3/2020 c21
3AyumuMatsuoXIII
I would love to see what you can do if you choose to rewrite this! I enjoyed reading it very much and when I saw the notification in my mailbox that you had posted something I was ecstatic. I hope you do rewrite this, and I hope that you have fun! Thank you for opening yourself creatively, even if you look back and cringe. Time changes things, big and small. ( ‿ )

I would love to see what you can do if you choose to rewrite this! I enjoyed reading it very much and when I saw the notification in my mailbox that you had posted something I was ecstatic. I hope you do rewrite this, and I hope that you have fun! Thank you for opening yourself creatively, even if you look back and cringe. Time changes things, big and small. ( ‿ )
11/3/2020 c21 DVolt
Would absolutely love a continuation/rewrite! Glad to hear that you’re still doing well!
Would absolutely love a continuation/rewrite! Glad to hear that you’re still doing well!
11/3/2020 c14 HeartsGlow
Funny that Minerva would say that about Harry when in many (if not most) of their 'adventures', Hermione was the instigator!
Funny that Minerva would say that about Harry when in many (if not most) of their 'adventures', Hermione was the instigator!