for Dragons speak Parseltongue too, you know11/2/2020 c21 
124goddessa39
Welcome back to writing. Maybe you find your old stuff embarrassing, which is natural. But I amongst many others find much of that work smile-worthy and will reread it happily. Sometimes irreverant is what we want. I'm glad you are back and even if you want to rewrite I do ask that you at least keep your old stuff up.
124goddessa39Welcome back to writing. Maybe you find your old stuff embarrassing, which is natural. But I amongst many others find much of that work smile-worthy and will reread it happily. Sometimes irreverant is what we want. I'm glad you are back and even if you want to rewrite I do ask that you at least keep your old stuff up.
11/2/2020 c20 41Rico Perrien
Please continue. I am intrigued by the direction this one is going. Very different from most stuff I have read.
41Rico PerrienPlease continue. I am intrigued by the direction this one is going. Very different from most stuff I have read.
11/2/2020 c21 azertq
Hi. I’ve discovered your fic last week i think? Or perhaps rediscovered, i can’t remember. There’s just too much fics i’ve been following.
I just wanted to say it’s often the writer who are the most critic about a fic.
As for me, i’ve taken your fic as it went. True, sometimes it just didn’t go the way i would have prefered but that’s the same with every other story. So i just enjoyed it as i went through the chapters and had fun reading it.
So yeah, if you wish to continue/rewrite it, i’ll keep reading it.
Have a good day.
Hi. I’ve discovered your fic last week i think? Or perhaps rediscovered, i can’t remember. There’s just too much fics i’ve been following.
I just wanted to say it’s often the writer who are the most critic about a fic.
As for me, i’ve taken your fic as it went. True, sometimes it just didn’t go the way i would have prefered but that’s the same with every other story. So i just enjoyed it as i went through the chapters and had fun reading it.
So yeah, if you wish to continue/rewrite it, i’ll keep reading it.
Have a good day.
11/2/2020 c21 2jadesabrexiv
I would love to see where you are going with your story arcs and character development.
The premise that you proposed has(had) a lot of potential and I will confess that I laughed out loud a few times because of it. (FYI: My girlfriend will NOT be happy to see updates on this one because this fic was one of the first to get added to her Do NOT read While Alexendria is Sleeping list.)
If/when you do a rewrite please be kind enough to post another Author's Note on this thread so I can insure that I get the notifications on your updates.
Thank you for the time, energy and imagination that you put into your writing. It is appreciated.
JSX
2jadesabrexivI would love to see where you are going with your story arcs and character development.
The premise that you proposed has(had) a lot of potential and I will confess that I laughed out loud a few times because of it. (FYI: My girlfriend will NOT be happy to see updates on this one because this fic was one of the first to get added to her Do NOT read While Alexendria is Sleeping list.)
If/when you do a rewrite please be kind enough to post another Author's Note on this thread so I can insure that I get the notifications on your updates.
Thank you for the time, energy and imagination that you put into your writing. It is appreciated.
JSX
11/2/2020 c12 HeartsGlow
Impersonating Moody all year? It's only been three months! The first task was Nov. 24th and this can't be more than two or so weeks later. Anyway, why don't they just look at the Maurauder's Map... DUUUHHH!
Impersonating Moody all year? It's only been three months! The first task was Nov. 24th and this can't be more than two or so weeks later. Anyway, why don't they just look at the Maurauder's Map... DUUUHHH!
11/2/2020 c18 41Rico Perrien
A lingering question - why did Harry not check the Marauders' Map to identify the fake Moody? This has been bugging me for a few chapters (excellent work by the way)
41Rico PerrienA lingering question - why did Harry not check the Marauders' Map to identify the fake Moody? This has been bugging me for a few chapters (excellent work by the way)
11/2/2020 c6 HeartsGlow
FYI: The World Wide Web (also known as W3) was only invented in 1994. The first Web page was fairly simple and didn't have much content. Most people used paid, dial-up online services like AOL. You paid for every minute you used it. Yahoo was also "born" in 1994. His comment "almost everything is on it now" doesn't make sense as there wasn't a lot of content there at that time. So, the idea that Harry was able to research all that on the Web is unlikely, esp. while living with the Dursleys. I was there, I lived through it.
FYI: The World Wide Web (also known as W3) was only invented in 1994. The first Web page was fairly simple and didn't have much content. Most people used paid, dial-up online services like AOL. You paid for every minute you used it. Yahoo was also "born" in 1994. His comment "almost everything is on it now" doesn't make sense as there wasn't a lot of content there at that time. So, the idea that Harry was able to research all that on the Web is unlikely, esp. while living with the Dursleys. I was there, I lived through it.
11/2/2020 c3 HeartsGlow
Chapter one said that Victor destroyed "one of the eggs". Here you say "all of the eggs". (BTW, in canon it was some of the eggs). So why the change? I couldn't vote on the pairing, so I guess it's closed. Too bad you didn't make it Harry/Luna and Neville/Hermione. I think they would have been good for each other, and the second pairing is very rare
Chapter one said that Victor destroyed "one of the eggs". Here you say "all of the eggs". (BTW, in canon it was some of the eggs). So why the change? I couldn't vote on the pairing, so I guess it's closed. Too bad you didn't make it Harry/Luna and Neville/Hermione. I think they would have been good for each other, and the second pairing is very rare
11/2/2020 c20 bobyork19
good lord this was on heck of a good rea, but its disappointing that its been 3 years since your last update
i will check to see if you rebooted this
Ray
good lord this was on heck of a good rea, but its disappointing that its been 3 years since your last update
i will check to see if you rebooted this
Ray
11/2/2020 c21 255940g
I'd love to read this again if you wish to continue! its wonderful to hear from you. I cant wait to see whatever you do
I'd love to read this again if you wish to continue! its wonderful to hear from you. I cant wait to see whatever you do
11/2/2020 c21 2silentfan9
Please rewrite, it’s a good story with few errors as far as cannon tells it, and I would like to see it finished
2silentfan9Please rewrite, it’s a good story with few errors as far as cannon tells it, and I would like to see it finished